Is Your Original Character a Mary-Sue? | Comments

Acceptable is what i got, i get inspo from magical girl animes, she's (unknowlingly) the daughter of the main villian who i havent came up with a name for her mother yet, so she lived with her father who idk how he managed to get with the main villian and had a child with her just get still figuring that one out, but then as an adult she met 2 other girls who they became magical girls with to save another world called naridia, a land of eternal hope that fell under the main villains control, the ice queen is what she's called untill her real name gets revealed later, they became magical girls bc they met the prince of naridia who escaped to find people who could give hope to others, my oc is ok at maths horrible at english and good at art chemistry and history and average at the rest, her hair is a light cyan and her eyes are yellow, if this was a series then around the 31st episode she'd find out that the ice queen was her mother i actually have no names for all of them exept for the mc whos name is yuki, (mainly because i love the name) and still have to name the rest of the characters

Acceptable. Ok! This oc is just a spider person (more on spider side, not a spiderman kind of person) cuz its a story of animals (or spirits) that can turn to humans. My oc is a side character who mostly tries to help out in big things (besides the fact of having no magical powers in the sense of healing or speed) and is basically if I just threw myself in the story. I'm surprised a copy of me isn't a Mary Sue.

Acceptable! Good! I tested this out on 2 Ocs, both acceptable! Thats good- Anyways Im going to explain them (For a GLMM so if you dont like that stuff stop reading) OC 1: Lisa. Shares a 1st initial with me. Dirty purple eyes and an alpha wolf-human. Has a lot of powers although that makes life dangerous for her as a lot of people try and hunt her, either out of greed or regard for public safety as she is quite dangerous. Plays the role of leader amongst her friends, though she knows its fake and its eating her up inside. Character 2: Isabella. Alpha wolf-human who has a great home life but was picked on as she was an easy target, and too afraid to stand up to the bullies. She eventually couldnt take it anymore and befriended the bullies, forgetting how nice a person she used to be. During the story she realises what a horrible person she had become and leaves the bullies for the aforementioned Lisa. So anyways, Im glad neither of these are Mary Sues! :D and if you read this far thank you!

I got acceptable.

I'm sorta surprised, but also not due to the fact I worked months on this characters. Anyway, his name is Microwave, he is my actual Persona. He is a human with a severely scared face, so he hides it... under a microwave mask. I choose this object bc I though it was funny okay- anyway, he is pretty loud and annoying, oblivious, etc. It takes a long time for some to even get used to him. He doesn't like the thought of falling in love, due to him having a emotional wound, and that he knows that he'll feel trapped. He hates it when people talk about the scar on his neck, and when people attempt to remove his mask or "low battery" hoodie from his adoptive brother. He is a G O D with guns, especially his favorite gun, the 22 long rifle. He loves chaos and explosives( I see now that he is kinda alike dead pool) he is terrible with healing people and himself, so he has new cuts and scars all the time.

That's about all I have rn.

My Oc is a WoF Icewing/Rainwing hybrid. His name is Polar. Polar has uncontrollable Ice breath that he has to be extra careful of. He once sighed while trying to figure out how to pick a lock and nearly froze it off! He comes from a smaller Icewing village where they attempt to make the "perfect" Icewing. Its a small cult that everyone just sorta goes "oh God there go the crazies." Polar was really just to experiment with what they believe to be a lazy dragon race. Polar is able to make friends with two other hybrids, Pollution (Icewing Nightwing), and Glacier (Icewing Seawing). Both are rejects of the cult due to being ditzy, childish, and clumsy. When they get older they fly away to find their non-icewing families. They learn quickly that they aren't ready to leave eachother's sides though, and so they stick together to train as bodyguards for the elite dragons. They make quite a bit of trouble and just generally have fun together. They're "brothers from other mothers" and even though Polar would have you believe he's heartless and could kill in an instant.... he's really just a big big baby. When he was younger he would try to look more like an Icewing only appearing white, light grey, light blue. Now, however, he opts for a more vibrant pallette! Orange, Yellow, Purple, White, and a little Blue!

I got acceptable. I wasn't expecting that tbh. anyways have her info :>

Name: Mortisa
age: 15

hair: when down it is back length. black to purple. it is usually in buns and held by a moon hairclip

e/c: a pinkish-red
b/t: retangle
Height: 5'"6

lore: she was always a shy, introverted girl growing up in her home country Canada. During school, youd always find her in the library reading a book about witchcraft, wanting to begin this practice as it had always intrigued her. Some call it a strange interest but she has always enjoyed the thought of using herbs, crystals, and other similar things. She would often be found practicing the usage of herbs or crystals for positive charms, such as good luck or good health. However, many didnt think Mortisas interest was a natural one, resulting in Mortisa losing confidence in herself and growing shy.

Mortisa seemed to get mocked and picked on a lot more, her new shyness only provoking this as she seemed to be an easier target. Over time, this caused her to lose sight of herself and it took a while for her to find who she was again. This didn't stop her from practicing her witchcraft. It was her passion, after all. Despite being picked on for her hobby, she always had a tight circle of close friends who helped her along the way and embraced her talent rather than mocking her because it didn't fit the social norm. One friend, in particular, a girl a year older than Mortisa, stuck by her side and even guided her as she continued to learn about modern witchcraft. They often spent time together, and over time Mortisa developed feelings for the girl. Mortisa, confused about her new emotions, began to realize that she was bisexual and she was finally able to truly embrace who she is.

Shes since come out of her shell, showing off a whole new attitude on life and how she perceives herself to be. She still spends time with her new girlfriend, and the two make an odd but cute couple!

name: Lilith
Age: 19
height: 5'"8
body type:pear

lore:l Lilith was born like everyone else except everyone in that world had powers she has a scar on her left shoulder it from when she first tried out her powers she have brownish hair she usual wears off the shoulders shirts and shorts/pants/dresses her hair length is near her back she is kinda pale skinned she is mute she also is a lesbian

.She goes by she/them she also has adhd she has fire powers and she is a pacifist.

Flaws: meek (overly gentle),disturbed (has some sort of mental illness),kinda vengeful

Acceptable! Thats something I can work with
Name: Tam
Age:23
Species: Unkailand

Appearance: oak wood brown hair (short, with little bangs that always get in her eyes), hazel colored eyes, light green skin, kind of underweight.

Personality: ambivert, kind of stubborn, street-smart, sensible, is sometimes impulsive, likes to know all the angles before making an important decision, mainstream, patient.

other info: Ojimah, the only moon in the solar system with inhabitants, is the central base for space travel and entertainment for other colonists around their solar system.

Tam had moved there a few years ago, and shed cinched a job in child entertainment.

My OC is a Marvel OC. Let's see... She is pretty but not TOO pretty. She dresses how I would dress if i was from the MCU. She had a horribly past. Her name is Sky which has nothing to do with my name. She has a long lifespan because she is from Asgard. She shares alot of my Interests and traits. nobody falls in love with her. she dies but then comes back. She was adopted twice. She is very nervous. She is half Jotun. She can be invisible and create illusions. You can probably tell what character she is based off of. Hint: he is her brother in this story. She kinda has a dark side. Anyway I got acceptable.

i got "Acceptable". My oc is from harry potter fanfic. her name's Virginia. her family has a very wild history with werewolves (its basically in her genes, in a inactive way) and when she takes the wolfsbane potion she practically feels horrible. Besides that, she just wants to live normally. almost every animal hisses at her basically, especially cats. and literally at some point in histroy she wants to basically d1e to stop suffering (and she does btw)

"Acceptable."
Well, I feel that fits, haha

My OC is Kit, a fifteen-year-old boy from the modern world. But this world has a twist, superpowers exist, and Kit has a good dose of them. He's a shapeshifter, but like any superpower, it has its limits.

Here's the thing however. Kit doesn't want to be a superhero, he wasn't to a super*villain*

Acceptable is what i got, i get inspo from magical girl animes, she's (unknowlingly) the daughter of the main villian who i havent came up with a name for her mother yet, so she lived with her father who idk how he managed to get with the main villian and had a child with her just get still figuring that one out, but then as an adult she met 2 other girls who they became magical girls with to save another world called naridia, a land of eternal hope that fell under the main villains control, the ice queen is what she's called untill her real name gets revealed later, they became magical girls bc they met the prince of naridia who escaped to find people who could give hope to others, my oc is ok at maths horrible at english and good at art chemistry and history and average at the rest, her hair is a light cyan and her eyes are yellow, if this was a series then around the 31st episode she'd find out that the ice queen was her mother i actually have no names for all of them exept for the mc whos name is yuki, (mainly because i love the name) and still have to name the rest of the characters

I got acceptable and i was relived for that but just in case if anyone was wondering my oc is a demon with slight angle features ( wings like its only the wings oh and her eye XD i have another character like this but opposite) and for her powers, she can only shapeshift ( she can't take the powers to the people she changes into if she did ) and manipulate electricity ( meaning she can like to charge her own phone but if she isn't careful can also break it ) but for the most part, i took this cause my friend called her a married sue TwT.

I got Acceptable! It's kind of hard to answer these quizzes because my character is from a warrior cat fan fiction. She is from a rogue group and her name is Virgo. Her best friend got exiled and later killed, and she faces love drama.

Holy mother of God, these comments are old. Anyway, I got excellent. Good, I guess. Teheh :P.

My oc is a human guy whos abusive, manipulative, mean spirited, but can be nice to u if ur a friend of his. He also a cult leader.. well, his cult is a pyramid scheme, but no one knows that!! >:(

I got "Acceptable"

They don't have a name cause it's unnecessary. Their story, however, it is told in the form of many since they are reading a giant history book XD

Thanks for this test, it was really fun!

Acceptable,my oc is based on the warrior cats book series and she has had a abusive past but is trying to get over it which she eventually will later on. Cool quiz anyways mate.

Oof. Well, the character I did is for a little personal cartoon... like, if some horror movie killers had kids. And, Adam’s acceptable then! :> Good for them. I guess they could use some spicing up or something like that. :V

My OC Lullaby got "Acceptable" WOW! I wasn't expecting to get that! She is a non-fan character. She is the Angel of Dreams. I thought she may be a mary sue, so I went to a bunch of mary sue quizzes and luckily, all of them have said she isn't.

i got acceptable and i guess i would say so my oc is shy with a really girlish figure like he has curves despite being a boy. his sister was like really mean to him as a kid she would hit him and make him " Train" and fight her in matches and he would end up losing most of the time and she even went as far to cut out his kidney but he survived she doesn't really hate him but they just have like an itachi and sasuke situation where she only hurts him beacuse she knows he wont survive being weak. anyway he goes to hogwarts ( yes this is harry potter) and he meets this girl with long red hair and he crushes on her and turns out his sister goes to the same school and she bullies him and this girl he crushes on saves him i also didnt mention her hair turns into fire when shes mad.

eyyy I got excellent for the main boi in a comic I'm tryin to write :)) He's an angel boi called Fell, age 17, that lives on earth for certain reasons who has a few abilities that are different from regular angels due to his genetics, such as strength and the ability to control fire (but not make it, he has to carry around a lighter). Due to some trauma in his past, he can't fight more than one person at a time without freezing up, but he tries his best to work around it. He has a bit of a dark side also cuz of his genetics that causes him to snap when someone does something to him that's absolutely unforgivable, such as hurting/killing a friend or destroying a very personal item. He's asexual, since I didn't wanna shoehorn any dumb romance plot in with him. Usually though, he's a pretty nice and nerdy guy, if a little childish at times. Glad to see all that characterization paid off :D

I got acceptable for a Villain character named greif who kills everything it touches and exists only to cause greif

Yayyy. I have no real need to worry. Alice may live another day.