Is Your Character a Mary Sue? | Comments

I got 29%. My character's name is Kei Mitchel. He is a My Hero Academia fan character. His ability is called sound wave (and no I did not try to copy earphone jack's quirk). He manipulates the sound waves around him and uses them to his advantage. The drawbacks are the vibrations go through his entire body before he uses them, so if they are too much for him when his body isn't ready, he could possibly die. He has pinkish purple hair and it is cut like Saka's from Avatar: the last air bender, and its dyed electric blue on the ends.

He first appears when he is transferring to UA from a hero school in America, but on his way there he gets attacked by a villain with a mind control quirk. He ends up hurting some people and when he is captured by the police he is released from the quirk. He tells the police and they release him when they catch the villain. When he enters UA he is mistreated by people in other classes, and his own, class 1-A (he is in 1-A because he was in a hero class in America) and joins best Jeanist's agency because best Jeanist liked his quirk and style.

After around a month nobody has even tried to be friends with him and he is paired up in English class with Denki Kaminari for a project (cuz denki isn't very bright and Kei used to live in america so he is fluent in english, also he felt bad). When they are paired up they don't get along very well at first, but then bond over the greatest thing to ever exist, memes. They soon become friends, and after a long while most people in the class start to warm up to him, save for a few people *cough*bakugou*cough* and thats it.

22% Mary Sue- not so bad I guess

I mean my character does have a tragic past but the reason is because of the government being very corrupt. In short, a girl named Rayne goes through boarding school until she fed up and goes crazy. The governments plan is to have everyone and I mean EVERY SINGLE SOUL IN THE WORLD on board with their ideas, if not theyll be executed. Many others across the globe, like Rayne, also go madhatter over the pressure thats being forced upon them. Meanwhile, Rayne gets so crazy she murders her parents because they trusted the government was good and their only true religion. The reason why I made up this world story arc is so I can prove how manipulating the rulers of the world can be. I also put in lessons through Raynes eating disorder and other mental illnesses that can form overtime through pressure. Another lesson is from Rayne in this quote, I dont cry because I regretting what I did. Im accepting it. You should too. Then again dont cry too much its annoying.

I got 15%

You know what, Im pretty happy with that. I used one of my favorite ocs Reynn Olsen, the captain of the royal knights in his home village, Atuavia of Khstanmar. He joined when he was 17 because his parents were killed (cliche, I know) by antagonist Lord Nilo, whose real name is Chaos. His goal: to protect his village from the next coming of Chaos and, most importantly, to shield his little sister, Rose. During his time as commander, he has grown close to Queen Camille, ruler of Atuavia, who eventually falls in love with the knight. A few years later, at age 23, Reynn is met with a young boy, the protagonist of the story, Nova, who eventually comes to the realization that he must help Queen Camille and the other royals of Khstanmar in their quest to defeat Chaos. And Reynn, begrudgingly, tags along and helps. Theres a bunch of other things that go along with his (or, their, I suppose) story, but its a bit much to write. I suppose Reynn does have some stereotypical attributes, but I tried to flesh him out as much as possible without it being too overbearing.

(15% mary sue) My ocs bame is nettlesting and she is a warrior cats oc (i have been making only warriors ocs for the past six years, this one is my latest.) she is just as important to the story as her mate Matthew (a kittypet) and her two kits (they are grown up now) Icewing and Clovertrot. They are a kind if toxic family, matthew not able to be very present in his childrens lives and nettlesting having a very short temper with her children due to resentment. This behavior from nettle comes from her firstborn kit, nightkit, drowning in a river while crossing. He was alone at the time, but Nettlesting still deemed it her own fault for bueng negligent. As a result she started to neglect her two living kits, a moon away from becoming warriors. Ice turned to himself to deal with his mothers lack of attention, becoming quite obserbvent and reserved. Clover turned to orhers, becoming quite the talker but ultimately having breakdowns whenever she was alone. The two turned to their mentors as parental figures, leaving Nettle with herself and her own denial, which she isnt able to deal with on her own. Nettle still hasnt recovered from losing her Nightkit, and it hasnt gotten better since her two living children started ignoring her. She is very close with the med cat, who us helping her get better. Ger children are permanently closed off from their mother. They visit Matthew sometimes to catch him up on clan life, but they dont really view him as a dad either.

22% Mary sue.

She's a UT OC that was made to be a joke Mary sue but then I actually started working on her and she turned into a good character :,D wtf is wrong with me. Anyway, here

Sansa (joke name. Also no her real name). They are a Skeleton that has major ADHD and no magical powers. The reason for no magic was due to a damaged soul, so not only a lack of powers, but a shortened life span. The only way she could use magic for a short period was through "chemical magic" which is mixing monster magic with chemicals to liquidfy the magic to be drank. Will one last a few minutes. Sansa (I wheeze at the name every time lmao) is a 42 year old, with a height of 5'6. For being so old, she is surprisingly active and childish, possibly due to ADHD.

yeah that's all I got

I was curious about how one of my characters would do, so I put in Xamash-Oyen Alanor (Yes there is a reason for the name). They were brain wiped by some common fairies after they got lost in a deep forest, and were drugged/controlled with magical painkillers, to be used as a toy. The fairies realized that they could use Xama as a tool, so they found a more permanent solution to Xamas constant headaches: A soul trapping mirror. With no semblance of individuality Xama was carted around by the fairies as a murderer of demons, until Xama came in contact with an upcoming priest. The priest fell in love with Xama, but they were unable to reciprocate any feelings, so the priest tried a difficult ritual to give Xama back their humanity. The ritual had a catastrophic accident and the priest lost his life. Xama, now understanding how they had been taken advantage of, looks to make amends in hell for the crimes they have committed.

Ayo, 21% percent this time now! Not too shabby!

My oc is Mary Jane(ironic I know) and is a fan-character for the dating sim "I love you, Colonel Sanders." They were basically the apprentice of Professor Dog, and studied along with the class course. Of course in my AU, the whole thing is much longer as for character development, and that sweet, sweet shipping. At first, she's really timid and inclusive, but proves to be very smart and witty to her classmates, always able to come up with some clever and complicated 'nerd comeback', which caught the attention of many people, more specifically the Player, Colonel Sanders, and Aeshleigh. But she does end up coming down with a crush for Aeshleigh cuz I'm all about that lesbian energy-

But I'm rambling on now. Overall, this quiz was really fun to do!

I got 11% for my character. I'm writing a story using her. I'll just write about her.

Her name is Larka Kiea, she lives in a fantasy world. (Reason why her name is like that) She has curly tawny hair with deep tan skin and grey eyes. She's an assassin who joins a gang in book 2. (Reading the story will help make sense) She became an assassin because she found out her husband was cheating on her with her friend. She didn't have the greatest relationship with her parents. But the backstory wasn't tragic. Before she was an assassin, she was a musician, it plays a big part in the story. How do you like her?

My OC is 15% marysue according to this test but this was a confusing test because he is a alien a lazy one and he excuses himself for it because his mom pushed him to his limits in education when he was little he is intelligent with education but lazy and i used this to drive the plot forward he landed on earth and got stuck there and meets other aliens no one hates him but 't got to know him no one likes him either they hadnt he tries to create communicator to tell other aliens he was stuck. he was in a trio of aliens who were nice enough to take him in and he hid with them and they got to know each other and became friend he has a slite crush on one of them whos past is unknown she can be a little obnoxious at times but she is pretty and was slowly opening up until my OC messed up and and got mad I know its bland I'm still working on giving them personality

Are my characters that bland? Did it for two of my characters and got 10% and 11%. It said I could probably use some spicing.

My ocs are Carolina and Sam. Theyre both demons and he demons powers are all stored up in a bottle theyre all born with and if another demon steals the bottle they can use it. But if the bottle gets destroyed or all the liquid in to spills out the demon dies.

Sam is a lower middle class demon. Her main ability is to hear sounds well, but she steals some other abilities from other demons later on. Shes not very appealing but not unpleasant to look at either. Shes 24-25 years old, got blue eyes and red hair, and is very athletic. She dies later after getting her bottle stolen and broken by my angel oc.

As for Carol I thought she would be in the Mary sue category considering that shes a nobility amongst the demons, is attractive, rich, and powerful. Literally her only flaw is her lack of physical strength and her s---ty personality. Her main power is to control people like puppets but she stole a lot more from other demons. Shes 30+ years old and loses her arms and a horn after being mauled by another demon oc.

My characters parents were murdered, shes a teen, shes (minor) royalty -- but I cant change any of that because I'm doing a role playing writing thing with my friends and those are the basics for most of the characters. Its like a school for royalty but all the parents were assasinated and spies have infiltrated the school playing as royals. I only got 24%, which isn't bad considering the pretty cliche background. She's pretty normal looking and can get really jealous so that helped I think. Any suggestions?

My character is a Red Dead OC Born in 1839. His name is Lee Evans. He had a bad relationship with his parents as he had different ideals regarding slavery. He was kicked out with his brother in '55 and enlisted in the Union army in '62. He survived but his brother did not. He became a gunslinger and was involved in gunfights throughout the 1860s-1910s. Most being in the 1880s. Lee became a Lawman in '78 and was relieved in '84. He was elected Marshal of a Utah town in '03 but was shot in the back of the head

10% Mary sue!
He also has PTSD...

22% Hmmmmmmmm the character I test with is Vivianwa Kowane, the character I literally ripped myself then put as a character from the name, personality and down to the backstory but her appearance is better than me because I suck at replicating things?? So of course if someone hates her I take it as a personal attack because she's literally me but appearance-wise, a little better. So for starter her eyes isn't that compare small to me, and she's have doesn't have some kind of scare left over all over her limbs and her skin is lighter because light skin is my country's beauty standard. and she has a unnatural color hair and eyes but nobody cares because it's hard to tell they dyed or use contact or not because the natural occurring hair is very wild.

Hmmm body shape???? EVeryone except my family telling me that I have a nice body shape (I have average bmi with pear body shape). Smart?? Most people expect that because I ducking read English fiction online daily even more that my mother language and they would ask me to teach them part they not understand if not for the fact that I have awfully bad social skills and (very) bad tamper.

15% on one character Ive been lining up the story for. Theres a country populated by dragons(Endross), one by mainly elves(Lorent), and one that was recently united into Zoso from the previous beastkin city-states. With the previously disorganized manner of beastkin governance, they were often taken as slaves by elves and a few dragons as well. Elves also have the tendency to buy/have them captured as test subjects for various experiments. With the Zosoan Revolution that united beastkin, the ones in captivity also demanded better treatment and revolted, killing many innocent elves and dragons in the process. One such case left behind a child called Aiko Korikos, because I have a ton of other dragon characters named in a similar style. The hatchling is raised in Lorent, in a city known for its impressive accomplishments in the fields of magical(yes this does exist) and alchemical(this too) research. She has a happy childhood, with a few minor incidents of bullying, but mainly people being distant for her being a dragoness and not an elf. She looks different, so its a given. The orphanage she grew up in was actually run by an elf family, two parents and two girls. She gets along well with them and is raised as the only orphan for 17 years, as they decide to adopt her and close the orphanage as it wasnt official either way. She eventually grows up and gets a job at a research facility since being a maid just wasnt making enough money. There, she gains some ties to the criminal underworld and gains an interest in botany. She starts cultivating dangerous plants that are safe to most humanoids, creating a crossbreed of two flowers. One of these two flowers was kieta, a flower that collects mana in the day and discharges the extra in a glowing halo at night. The petals slowly crystallize into mana crystals and fall off as new ones grow in. The other was amaryllis, a bright red flower which has the magical property of releasing fire element magic(not actual fire) that des