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I'm writing some random little stories about my characters who are pretty much just normal people. I did this quiz about the "kind of protagonist but not really".

Her parents died in a car crash when she was two years old so her god father adopted her and her twin brother. They are both aware of what happenned to their parents and who they were so there isn't really a big reveal where they find out about it.

This character is basically a child genius who is obsessed with astronomy, space, paradoxes and the universe in general. I admit that that is one of the only similarities between this character and I. She's pretty plain looking, blond hair, brown eyes and lot's of freckles. Her flaws are that she's a loud mouth, doesn't know when to stop, she can be a bit sassy at times and she is frequently in trouble at school even thought she is a good student. The best way to get her to do something is to tell her that she can't do it, which is something she learned from her god father. (Her god father is also a genius, he's a professor at an university and he teaches science, math, astronomy and physics which is one of the reasons this character is so into that sort of stuff. Neither she or her brother call him dad since he never wanted them to do so)

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Let me yap about him then for a hot minute, his name's Elijah Copp; he's an insert for rdr2, as he dies before the plot of rdr1. He's a native and partially white man, born April 5th, 1852. His father, a native man who joined the wapiti tribe along with a few other members of his previous one after theirs was wiped out, was killed when he was four years old, so he was left with his sister, Delilah, who was twelve at the time, and his mother. He can't remember his father very well, so the only thing this really affects is his cultural knowledge.

When he was 17, his mother and sister were killed during a train robbery, they were both shot down by the O'Driscolls robbing said train. Elijah escaped luckily, but he ended up killing for the first time, having to bash the head of a man who tackled him down while he was running.

He worked at emerald ranch for 2 years after that, with the promise of a home to stay in, though he ended up falling in love with the ranch owner's daughter; the two started courting. The ranch owner, not wanting his daughter to marry a native man (because everyone was racist in the 1870s), fired Elijah, who then went on to become a hired arms and a bounty hunter.

now 21, he's a guard for a bank stagecoach, headed from valentine to strawberry. They get robbed by O'Driscolls, as the area's infested with them. Elijah, on a rage blinded whim, kills four of them, chasing off the rest, abandoning the stage. He gets fired.

Now, we have Elijah, homeless on the streets of Saint Denis, looking for work- or food, it doesn't matter which, both are good, when he meets Josiah Trelawny- who, keep in mind, is about the same age as him at the time. Him and Josiah start talking, and become acquaintances.

Over the course of a few years, Elijah does some work for Josiah- Who eventually connects him to the Van Der Linde gang when he's 26. Around this time, an affair between the two starts as well. Elijah runs with the VDL gang for about 20 years, until

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Welp. Might as well talk about em. They are a fandom oc for LoZ: BOTW. Her name is Mox, and she is a part of the yiga clan. She's in her 50s and loves to bake and cook. Everyone in the clan (other than newbies and people with big egos) respects her bc they know she can whip their asses, or embarrass the hell outta them.

She never got into a relationship., and never really wanted one. She got into the clan really young, and stayed her whole life. She witty and doesn't give 2 shizs about what people think about her. Shes great with the bow and sword, but not to much the other weapons. When master Kohga died, the clan looked to her. When she started making a plan to kill Link, and put the plan out, her clan met a terrible fate. The plan was to get everyone one to ambush the hero after a few days of studying how he fights. . . Most of the clan was killed or badly wounded. She felt responsible. And she wanted revenge... she....... didn't make it.

My OC... she’s actually meant to be the daughter of the Candyman... but not as crazy. She’s 0% Mary Sue! Good job, Derry. You aren’t a Mary Sue. :>

YAY 11% procent gary sue XD