Is Your Character a Mary Sue? | Comments

My Stranger Things OC is meant to bs Dustin's older sister who's very overprotective and likes to call him "feather duster". She's only 20% mary sue •ω•

16%. Probably 'cause my character, despite having power over fear, is absolutely brutal in combat and a) regrets it and b) gets a lot of hate from other characters about it (as in, [no urls] kind of hate)

my oc is extremely complex to the point i found it hard to properly answer some questions LOL, got a 15%, not too bad for her. she's definitely overpowered but for a reason + the universe i have her in has become a world of my own in my mind, since the game devs suck ass (racism), she's a branch off of several other ocs that used to be MAJOR mary sues, since i was in fact like 6-7 yrs old i didn't know how to really write ocs that well, this was a fun test to take for sure though! :)

I got 15% "Characters at this level could probably use some spicing up without any damage. Go ahead and make her a little prettier!"

Girl but... my character is hella pretty, she just doens't have the tragic innecesary past and even tho she has magic and is a warrior princess I want to make her relatable for the non-existing reader, but I like the result, it means she could pass as a normal teen as I intented and not an over the top mary sue

My OC is 10% mary sue according to this test but can you make any for object heads or humanoids and the game they are supposed to be in is cuphead and his 4 abilities are portals he can only fit his arms in that can be anywhere they want them to be, time reverse only for 10 seconds (max strength and energy use which is very rare is 1 min) making objects out of static which fades in 1 hour unless it is food because they eat it and it stays until it the nature digestion has finished, freezing people with static for 10 seconds, is that OP? they just average body and not that fit, their story is a bit tragic but are they a mary sue? do I need to weaken their abilities? in the casino their one of dice's lackeys so I tried to make them the same amount and as powerful as the rest of them. They only have 3 friends and aren't that misunderstood and people do dislike them and they dislike people, they take insults and stuff well and the universe doesn't bend to their will, Is my OC a mary sue?

15% mary sue. The only reason I felt I earned this score for my OC is that I took the time to develop his story and character.

15%...ok. My OC had a rough past with her father, cause hes a sociopath that murdered her mom and sister in front of her, she managed to barley get away. Sooo...yeah I guess thats accurate

I got 15%

I was not expecting that, because I thought my character was a little Mary Sue-ish and she is also the older sister of a cannon character from HxH

In reality I have two differing eyes, so that one question doesn't count. Oh, and also, I got 2% Mary-Sue. Only took a minute until my OC was imperfect.

The OC I used for this quiz is an android who time traveled from a few years from the future. She was defective and ran away. If youwant more info, check out the comic called Akukx-1247/Astoria on ibispaint.com

The character I used for this is name Ble koudoni, (means Blue bell in Greek :D) shes an mlp character, her character isnt all that interesting. So she got a 19% mary sue, time to do another mlp oc!

I got 13%!! (Yay!!) the character i used was one called Harrkell. He has natural ginger hair and dark brown eyes (he also is very slim but has a history of undernourishment). He is a teenager and lives in another universe from our own. Though he wasnt raised by his parent he was raised by his older sister and later also his adopted brother (both were killed in a war which is a huge reason for his motivation). He doesnt have any powers though does have adhd (this isnt directly told in the story but he does express symptoms). He is a theif and lives with his (living) younger sister. Though he is flirtatious (and cocky) he doesnt get a love intrest. Also he is extremely scared of bugs. He doesnt have powers (though there is magic in my world). Any ideas to spice him up (or if I shouldnt).

I was using hp to see if he is a Gary stu. Answer not bothered about BUT. In the quiz you said Retarded. Which is an abelist slur. Please remove it. It personally made me uncomfortable as a disabled person that has been called retarded before.

Apologise for the grammar erros in advance, i just dont care

I got 24%

My sweet child, Mikios was a part of an experiment in the bnha universe, basicly he was a mix of nezu and hawks back story. he was borm with a slight mutation that gve him a tail and clawed feet.His parents, being discriminate a--holes, didnt want him, and gave him up the goverment. He was then trained and experimented on when the secondary part of his quirk developed when he was five. he has the abilties to manipuate shadows, and become one. Great. Now he has the doctors cutting him up, and making him fight these other kids. He is kept in check with electric colors and a small cabnit which would later make him claustraphobic and hate anything around his neck. Flash foward he is eleven, the heroes found out about the fcility and he is ou o there. The hero who saved him was calld Rising Hope. She was adopted him, and he now is in theapy and has an older sis named Janey. He can speak because in a ccident he tore his vocal chords, buts fine now, Janey has been teaching him JsL and he is much happier, and is currentlylooking into finding a school.

i got 24% for my oc, lowkey thought it'd be higher :") but uhh anyways heres my oc because everyone is is explaining theirs!!! also, sorry if i did any grammatical errors or punctuation errors, i swear i'm not a cringey 10 year old.

so, my chracters name is mei muzushima and you can probably tell by the name she is japanese. please don't judge me, i'm australian-japanese and i'm not some weeaboo. anyways, she is a bisexual girl just trying to get through life with a massive need to control everything. like, this girl plans out everything in her life and if it doesn't go to plan she has a full on panic attack and a breakdown. she developed this because her and her mother (single parent, babey!!) moved alot and that caused her to crave that little drop of stability and comfort. she has really nice, long, elbow length black hair and has pretty plain black eyes (i think i modelled this after yumeko jabami, i have a crush on that woman please be nice to me). she also uses alot of jokes to hide her pain and even though she went through alot of s---, she is really positive and tries to romanticise her life and tries to think it's all a ghibli movie.

onto her powers !! since i'm a teen, i have to add this, please don't hate me. girl basically has water bending, period. downside is that literally every night she has to plug herself with a iv to hydrate herself because even though she is only controlling water, it still is really taxing on her body and if she uses it too much, girl is f---ed.

she is part of the military because she wanted to make her workaholic mother proud (even if she wanted to become a fashion designer.) and she puts alot of other peoples emotions above her own.

ok, this is getting long. and if you've read through this, thank you and if you are going to reply, please give me any tips. i'm really new to the writing scene and i wanna learn how to write better.

I definitely expected a low number, considering he's just a corporate higher-up with a sick sense of justice, so 17% wasn't too much of a surprise.

So I got 23% for both of my characters. One of them I think is kinda Mary Sue and I'm working on that. So here they are: Mim is an orphan who lives with her aunt and cousin. She's a petite little thing due to her family trying to lie low and stay off the radar, so she never really gets a chance to get super healthy foods. Now onto her story: in a world where witches are brutally murdered, poor little Mim must keep her powers a secret from the government. She entertains herself by writing and never really learns to use her powers (she learns how to heal and create, but that's it. She learns how to create small barriers later but that's about it). Her aunt goes missing one night while looking for medicine for the cousin, whom had fallen ill. Mim is left with no other choice than try to care for the cousin. The cousin kills himself, leaving Mim to fend for herself. She flees with only two possessions; a wand and a Sunflower she found in her aunt's study. She meets a solider from the army called Thalia, whom produces pink fire and absolutely hates everything. They team up when Thalia finds out that Mim is a witch, assuming she's really powerful. Mim's personality is super quiet and she just kinda sits and waits before taking action. The girls meet Prince Vesper, whom has run away due to not wanting to run the kingdom upon his mother's murder. Vesper doesn't like either of them, but Thalia literally kidnaps him because she was one of the royal guards and swore to protect him, meaning that Vesper could just kill her if he wanted to. Well, Vesper eventually starts to warm up, as does Mim, she becomes extremely naive and likeable. Vesper is like an older brother to her and they all become some sort of misfit sibling family. Vesper eventually tells them that he can talk to ghosts and two ghosts in particular, Jazzy and Bronwyn, have been stalking the trio. Bronwyn is very psychotic and just really doesn't like Mim. There's a whole bunch more but I have to get onto the second