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Name: FalconStrike
Gender: Tom / Male
Role: Deputy

Pelt: Blue faded into brownish red, White from Underside of throat to mid torso & front paws

Eyes: Golden/amber

Personality: Cunning, Humorous, Couragous, & Determined.

Details/Traits: Extremely Sharp Claws, & Exellent Eye-Sight.

Lore: FalconKit became an apprentice, just as any other, at 6 moons. He was extremely determined to become an expert warrior, & a wonderful fighter, to defend those he loves. As an apprentice, he met a caring & gold-hearted she, named 'Fox`Tail'. He then became Falcon`Strike, & devoted the rest of his life to his mate & 3 sons. In a horrific earthquake, FoxTail was killed by a Land-Slide, along with two of his sons. He then raised the 3rd son, to be the greatest warrior of all time, & once he became deputy, he made sure his son would take his place after his death. He then passed at the age of 38 Moons (25 in human), His son taking his place, as requested to the leader. In StarClan, Falcon`Strike finally reunited with his one & true love, FoxTail.

More?: Falcon`Strike is one of my favorite, & many Ocs, I couldn't decide which to specificly use on this test- So i randomly decided, Falcon`Strike should be tested.

Name: Suntail
Rating: 84%
Age: 18 moons
Rank: medicine cat
Clan: WindClan
Prophecies: 1
Parents died after first prophecy
Positive traits: loyal, hardworking, sweet

Negative traits: envious, prideful, overworked

Likes: herbs, interacting with the StarClan, casting for kits

Dislikes: showboating, swimming, sleeping (very active)

Appearance: orange tabby, very floofy. Large tail, bandana. Brown eyes. White mittens.

Backstory: when Suntail was 2 moons old, she had her first prophecy. Soon after, her parents died. She mourned for a long time. Her father was the previous leader of WindClan. The new leader was very selfish and unkind. She ran away from WindClan and became a rogue. By the time she was 6 moons, she didn't enjoy the rogue live. She returned to WindClan and had a 1 moon sentence to torture. She got a scar from that one moon. She is now a medicine cat training an apprentice, Mothtail.

Name: DuskLeap
Gender: She-cat/molly
Clan: WindClan
Age:IDK they just old
Rank:Elder

Personality: A committed, friendly, cheerful she who tries to be independent even though she is death.

DuskLeap was never a real apprentice or warrior because of her hearing problem. Her brother and her had a great bond and he found a way to communicate with her. Although she never had a mentor she was determined to learn. After her brother finished training he helped her learn everything he did. As warriors she and her brother went out of camp and played together and tried hunting. Once he had passed she was overwhelmed and went to see her mother(SpiderFog) for comfort. Her brother helped her on her journey to starclan.

My oc is, Cyan'Breeze. She is a small elder she cats with a cyan pelt and eyes with black spots and toes with a black mask. She lives in river clan after being a leader of Thunder Clan and wiping out a clan by herself over time. She was a good cat and went to star clan after being killed by her sister from jealousy, rip.

Age:192 moons (16 years wow!)
Gender:She cat (Female)
Mate:Elk'Face (Died in a fire)

All names:Cyan'Kit, Cyan'Paw, Cyan'Breeze, Cyan'Star.

Parents: Mom:Meadow'Cloud. Dad:Five'Foot.
Time born:Oct/5/2078 at 5:34 am.

Name: Sparrowheart
Gender: She-cat
Clan: FogClan

Appearance: Brown with a black stripe running from her head to tail, white heart on her forehead, greenish-blue eyes

Personality: Light-spirited and naive, she's like a kit in a warriors body. She's also very caring and will help any cat in need.

Story: Her mother mananged to bring a time of peace between clans and later became leader of FogClan. Sparrowkit used to brag about this to the other kits, but later learned how snobby she was being. She became Sparrowpaw and her mentor was Onyxice, who would often have to take over Hailpaw's training as well. Sparrowpaw soon grew feelings for Hailpaw, but was unaware he was using her to get closer to the clan leader. At Sparrowpaw's first gathering, she met Squirrelpaw from MapleClan. She began getting very close to him and was too naive he was using her for secrets about FogClan. After they became warriors, Sparrowheart noticed her sister - Fadedbird - and Featherfall - a grey she-cat - grew feelings for each other. Sparrowheart couldn't understand why so she grew distant from her sister. Eventually, Sparrowheart and Hailcrash had a litter of kits; Nutkit and Ashkit. However, Ashkit disappeared a few days before his apprentice ceremony, which made her extra protective of Nutkit. At gatherings, she would often sneak off with Squirrelfern and began growing feelings for him too. Hailcrash knows this and is becoming possessive of her, which means Sparrowheart never has time to be alone.

That's all I've gotten done so far! She got a score of 73% :D

Name:coyote storm
Age:18 moons
Clan:wind-clan
Rank:deputy
Personality:strong,and prideful, yet gentle
Gender:male/Tom
Likes:kits,clanmates,his apprentice

Dislikes:shadow-clan patrols that cross the border/disobeying the code

Apearrence:coyote-storm is a cream tom with orange-ish stripes and amber eyes his appearance also makes him looks unbeatable in battle although he isnt

Backstory:he was raised in wind-clan. Born in a storm with his two brothers fish-kit, and bat-kit. While an apprentice he was mentored by hawk-breeze a brown she-cat. When he was a warrior he was given the name coyote-storm by his leader ferret-star. He fought off a badger loosing his brother fish-whisker. When he became deputy he was the age of 16 moons. He is described as wise. He tells stories to young kits,and apprentices. He has his very own apprentice now a she-cat named falcon-paw.

My oc is an ancien bloodclan warrior, she tried to escape from the war with the other clans and just live in the forest with her sister who has a handicap since the war, her name is Vipère which is viper in english.

So his name ist Phoenixstar (Phoenixfire) and he is related to Tigerstar and thats why he was in his first prophecy- He has an older Brother, two older Sisters and a Younger sister. His older brother has three kids but doesnt care for them. One of them became a kittypet, the other one joined his Clan later and the Last one became besties with him. So, he lived in an Oc-Clan called Crystalclan but they got attacked from wolves and one stole his Younger sister greykit who got the Name Dragonkit from them. She never changed her name and is now deputy of another OC-clan called Forestclan, her name is Dragonscale, short Draco. She hates Phoenix. He rescued her from the wolves and got to know the ex of his Brother who got banished from her Clan, because she was a healer. Phoenixstars prophecy was written in German, becuz I am German and I do Not want to translate it, so...No Prophecy for you, sorry :D Phoenix' mother died very early, her name was Spiritsoul, they named the oldest son after her, Silentsoul. He joined the "Clan" of their Aunt Cherryfog who now terrifies all Clans in the so called "old territories". Back to Phoenixstar: he was feared and hated by his father and all other cats and got mad after his older sis, Silverrose (now Silverstar), became leader of the Crystalclan and not him. He Made his own clan, the Clan of the night. He took in kittypets, banned cats and everyone who was good enough. After many moons He got accepted and ended his war with the Crystalclan.

The second Prophecy is more about his brother and his oldest son, himself being called "the innocent" by Starclan itself, after they called him "the Tiger" in the First prophecy. He treats Silentsouls Son Nightburn like his own, he has three kits, one of them will become evil. Phoenixstars dad became father again of two kits, one of them will die early, the other will become evil. Phoenixstar is gay and his partner is called Griffinclaw (Harry Potter lol). But because Phönix is an a-hole he has v

Name: Glowingheart
Age: 29 moons
Clan: Windclan

Personality: swift, not very strong, with some trust issues, somehow calm.

Appearence: A siamese averagely tall she-cat with blue-greenish eyes and a small scar in her cheek.

Backstory/trauma: Her mentor Flamingfox was a vicious, bloodthirsty and harsh yet skilled tom, who basically abused her in her apprenticeship. She heard things she wasn't supposed to and he tried to kill her, luckily a kit that had wondered out of camp to see them 'train' saw them, and the dawn patrol was just in time to save her life. She stayed in the medicine cat for some time before having her warrior ceremony. She then fell in love with Swiftgaze, a silent but caring tom. They had four kits called Onyxkit, Sunkit, Ivorykit and Coffeekit. (Now ima stop here bc she just lives a happy life, and it's her kits who have the prophecy, not her. Starclan gives the propechy to a random shy apprentice)

Name: Halo'Fang
Gender: She-Cat
Age: 36 Moons
Rank: Deputy
Clan:RiverClan

Personality: Stubborn, (Somewhat stupid but means well) Kindhearted Snarky.

Likes: Her mate and kits, (Kits were apprenticed before she was made deputy) A elder named Fallen'Stone (her brother)

Dislikes: One apprentice named Stormpaw, and Shadowclan

Appearance: Halo'Fang is a slender, glossy-furred she, she's (Somehow) a bengal patterned, dark brown with small light orange patches one on her front left leg, chest, tail, and face (Like.. a chimera cat) She has very subtle heterochromia, (Dark blue and greenish blue) Her left ear has a small rip out of it, and she has a scar across her nose from fighting a thunderclan cat who was hunting on riverclans territory shes a medium furred cat. Her pelt is usually well kept and she hates getting it dirty.

Idk.. I forgot my score and im to lazy to go redo it or look at it soooo yeah.

My OC's name is Dewfur she comes from RiverClan, and she is 32 moons old. She's a lesbian.

Dewfur's personality:

Dewfur is slightly more introverted. In converstions she is quiet, considerate, and funny. She is guided by her heart and likes to watch fish in the river. Dewfur can also be competitive and destructive. She doesn't share her opinions, but when she does it's in favor of war. Dewfur is power-hungry and is hoping to be leader one day.

Rank: deputy

Apperence: Her fur is desaturated gray with a striped tabby pattern. It is shaggy and long. She has a triangular face with circular blue eyes. She has a soft voice and a leafy scent. She has a long, fluffy tail and is considered loyal to most but she will turn evil.

Backstory: Her mothers were Featherface and Dappledpool, she was very close to Featherface because Dappledpool died shortly after giving birth to four kits, which left Featherface to raise them. Featherface was killed by a fox and after she became a apprentice and worked hard to try and please her dead parents. She soon began to go mad, and killed two of her siblings, Blueheart and Greythorn. Ever since she has been longing for power but acts loyal to one day become leader of RiverClan

Family:
Dappledpool (with StarClan)
Featherface (with StarClan)
Greythorn (with StarClan)
Blueheart (with StarClan)
Olivetail (alive)

mine is called Briarstripe, she’s a brown tabby Norwegian forest cat with a muscular build. she was found as a kit in RiverClan territory and taken in, and because of this is devout to her clan and proving herself to her clanmates. she tends to consider honesty the best policy, and rarely lies. A StarClan cat by the name of Quickhare who’d been a member of RiverClan in the past took notice of her, and gave her a prophecy as a chance to prove herself to her clan. She made it to the rank of deputy whilst fulfilling this prophecy (which is currently undecided as to what it’ll be). only three moons after this prophecy, however, she was killed by the cat she’d came to love, drowned in the river by someone she’d trusted who’d only been getting close to her to find out what she could to to steal her rank as deputy after killing her (the cat who killed her is called Sunflare). this is all very vague atm tho and may change

Name: Waxtail
Gender: Tom
Age: 27 Moons

Clan: Luminousclan (OC clan which is basically the main clan like Thunderclan)

Rank: Warrior

Personality (Good & Bad): Hot tempered, clam (At times), independent, honest, responsible, quiet, stubborn, Disobedient

Likes: Bathing in sunlight, the smell after it rains, fall winds, being alone, frogs, & mice

Dislikes: Being wet, snow, loud noises, rats, and dogs

Appearance: Waxtail is a large sized tom, with a long haired pelt, which has red, black, and red-ish brown calico ears, tail, feet and muzzle, and bright amber eyes.

Waxtail has a few scars from his kit-hood, one on his back, two on his front right leg, and one on his left hind leg.

Score: 59% (I know Waxtail isn't the best OC and he also is quite an old one, but I was not expecting that )

Name: BlazeFlight
Gender: Tim
Pronouns: He/Him
Role: Leader
Fur: Black and orange tortoishell
Eyes: Light green

Personality: Cold and rought. Sometimes can be mean but he really doesn't mean it sometimes. He is misunderstood

Lore: He was bringed to the clan (not sure abt the name yet) when he was a kit. He was bringed to a queen named DoveShade. DiveShade accepted Blazekit as her own quickly and treated him like her own. DoveShade already had another kit named Copperkit. Copperkit was older than BlazeFlight and was redy to apprentice in the next moon. Blazekit's brother didn't like Blazekit. Most of the clan didn't also like Blazekit. After long moons of his brother not giving him attention and his mother's love he was named as an apprentice. Blazekit was now named Blazepaw and was trained by the leader. The leader was also very interested in Blazepaw and treated him nicely. The clan didn't still fully agree having Blazepaw in the clan. Copperpaw was really famous in the clan. He was hard working and did anything to get attention from his clan. Later it was shown that Blazepaw wasn't really bad to the clan and did his best to be accepted. The clan started to like Blazepaw now more. But then his brother got jelaus. Copperpaw started to frame Blazepaw from little bad doings. This started to get the clan suspicious about Blazepaw. Soon Copperpaw was named CopperClaw. But not even that long after CopperBush was named, another apprentice was also named Cinderpaw. Blazepaw was now 8 moons old, CopperClaw 13 moons and Cinderpaw 6 moons. Soon Blazepaw grew up and was named BlazeFlight at the age of 13 moons. Time went by and nothing exiting really happened until BlazeFlight reached the age of 37 moons. Cinderbelly and Blazeflight became mates! They had grown a lot if love for each other nad has been best friends since they has been apprentices. Blazeflight was now 37 moons and a warrior, Cinderbelly 35 moons and a warrior and CopperClaw 41 moons and deputy. The life was

name: Sunpaw

appearance: Brown tabby with sun ray like stripes and golden eyes and a cream colored muzzle.

Clan: Riverclan

Story: Sunpaw was born to a she cat named Pebbleleaf in Riverclan but her father left to join Windclan before she was born. she had 3 other siblings and one that died at birth that she never knew about. the medicine cat apprentice got a prophecy from starclan saying, "When the Sun shines brightest the Shadows will fade." at first Berrypaw (The medicine cat apprentice) did not know what this meant but connected two and two and decided the prophecy was about Sunpaw. soon later, Shadowclan took over. there were many battles but eventually Riverclan was forced to retreat and live on the island. Sunpaw, Creampaw, Toadpaw, and Rockpaw went on a mission to restore peace to all clans.

ivytongue is a smart mouthed sarcastic and agile shekitty

backstory!!: When ivytongue was a young cat she was constantly compared to everyone around her. She had to fit to her mothers (shadefern’s) standards she had to supress her emotions to live up to her mothers expectations thus leading to lots of built up emotions later. Many moons later ivy had gotten appointed for deputy of shadowclan. Although now instead of just her mothers she had to live up to everybody around hers standards slowly driving her insane one day she snapped and killed the leader (lynxstar) and her own mother. she couldnt belive what she had done she knew she needed to flee she ran as fast as she could away from everyone until she had found a barn. Everytime she had thought of what she’d done she would rip a piece of flesh off her paw in punishment. a couple moons later she decided she couldnt keep doing this so praying no other cat had heard of her past she decided to go to thunderclan. suprisingly they hadnt heard what she had done and let her in. after some moons she had her eye on a tomcat named “brindlefeather” he had liked her aswell or so she thought only for him to be seen with a shecat from RIVERCLAN?? after that she decided to build up walls around her so no one could hurt her again. After awhile she had made friends although shes always on edge still leading to her short temper and snappy personality. (STILL WORKING ON HER STORY :3 PROLLY GONNA CHANGE IT)

I did my OC Viverridcall!

Viverridcall of BatClan She-cat Med. Cat Apprentice Diluted orange and brown tabby with yellow eyes and short fur. Is part of the group that deals with the Herb Fox area, so she's learned a bit of fox tongue. She is fairly liked by the Herb Foxes, and is welcome into their herb grounds as often as she likes. She teaches a few of them cat tongue in exchange for their hospitality and kindness.

(The Herb Foxes are foxes that hang around a mushroom patch near the southeast BatClan border. They... Eat the fungi to seek a... High. They've come to respect the ways of the clan cats- thus see no reason to attack or threaten them for no reason.)

Name: Mothglare
Gender: Tom
Clan: windclan
Age: 12 Moons
Rank: apprentice

Appearance: A small shortfured ginger tabby with amber eyes

Personality: Protective, weird, caring, quick thinker, warm hearted, funny, clever, annoying.

Dislikes: family, battles, being stressed, the cold, fleas, slimy fish, shadowclan

Likes: bugs, friends, prey, exploring, kits, the leader, some loners, other apprentices

score: was like 78 or smt

KP name: Panda
Clan name: PandaPaw -> PandaHeart
Gender: She/They

Story: Panda was born in a shelter and adopted by an abusive pit or two-legs. She watched her sister who had come with her die in their hands so listened to the stars and followed the brightest ones to RiverClan. She was held prisoner for a few days and than apprenticed to the leader SwiftStar. When she became a warrior she fell in love with BeeWing (She/Her). They ended up taking in a pair of kits they found by the ThunderPath. They named them DangerKit (He/Him) and MiracleKit (She/Her). PandaHeart than passed away a few moons later as she shoved MiracleKit out of the way of a monster after she attempted to hunt a bird.

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Name: One'Foot
Gender: Tom
Clan: ShadowClan
Age: 43 Moons.
Rank: Deputy

Personality: Trustworthy, fierce, realistic. Harsh, and his realism can appear as pessimism.

Appearance: One'Foot is a tall and broad-shouldered tom with a peanut coloured pelt and a chestnut brown tail and paws. One'Foot has shamrock green eyes and a brown area on his face. The tom has one extra dewclaw which is where he got his name, his ears are pointy and also.. brown.

Name: LogBranch
Gender: Male/Tom

Clan: (OC Clans) Formerly SparrowClan; Currently AppleClan

Age: 36 Moons (approx. 3 years)
Rank: Warrior

Appearance: A brown tom with a cream underbelly and dark brown stripes on his legs, a dark brown tail, and amber eyes.

Story: LogBranch was born with his sister, AshKit. They became apprentices together. Logbranch was mentored by StoneFall, a pure black tom with one blue eye and one green eye. LogBranch was loyal and always listened to his mentor. He and his sister also became warriors together. AshPaw became AshSong. And LogPaw became LogBranch. His sister was then chosen deputy. But then, while LogBranch was on patrol, he saw a beuaitul calico She-Cat. She was from AppleClan. Her name was FlowerPatch. LogBranch then figured out she liked him too. They then started meeting at the Big Oak and stuff happened. He then found out FlowerPatch was carrying his kits. By then his sister became leader and was now AshStar. He tried to hide everything but all else failed. He had one more choice and that choice was to join AppleClan. AppleClan only let him in because they were low on warriors. Now LogBranch is living with his mate and kits. But.. His sister is still mad at him...

Name: snowgoose
Gender: tom
Clan: thunderclan
Rank: senior warrior
Age: 55 moons

Personality: politeto clanmates, loyal, rude to loners and trespassers, not a fan of kittypets, patient

Apperance: a white longhaired bob tailed cat with yellow eyes, the tail looks like a goose's tail

History of name: as an apprentice he got bitten in the tail by a goose, he doesn't like to talk about it though

Name: Snake'lag
Age:16 moons
Rank: Queen

Personality:Deadly,mean,scary,blood luver,luvs kits.

Description,she-cat, has 3 kits that died by a Badgerstree clan warrior,kits names were Sparrowkit,Foxkit,and Bearkit,she is out getting revenge but sadly she died 3 moons after her kits died and now she is in the dark forest killing cats,but she found a love in the forest and her loves name is Lillowfern, Lillowfern is a she cat who also lost her kits, she is in Owltree Clan, and her and Snakeleg fell in love with each other and now they both are killing cats.