Is your OC good? | Comments
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I'm using this comment section to yap about Elijah (THIS QUIZ DOESNT HAVE ENOUGH OPTIONS BTW HE DOESNT HAVE ANY PETS.)
OK so I answered based off him at the end of his life cus that's where I write about him the most at but he's technically a linear character soo...
DESCRIPTION: he has long black grey streaked hair (as he is like 50 so keep this in mind when imagining him), and he has soft brown skin and brown eyes. there's this big chunk out of his cheek/nose bridge cus of when he was younger and he's a gunslinger/outlaw so he's decently muscular and pretty built but once again he's 50 so he has the old man fat too right. ok ok ok ok I love elijah so much y'all don't even get it anyways have fun reading his lore frlsies
His father, a native man who joined the wapiti tribe along with a few other members of his previous one after theirs was wiped out, was killed when he was four years old, so he was left with his sister, Delilah, who was twelve at the time, and his mother. He can't remember his father very well, so the only thing this really affects is his cultural knowledge.
When he was 17, his mother and sister were killed during a train robbery, they were both shot down by the O'Driscolls robbing said train. Elijah escaped luckily, but he ended up killing for the first time, having to bash the head of a man who tackled him down while he was running.
He worked at emerald ranch for 2 years after that, with the promise of a home to stay in, though he ended up falling in love with the ranch owner's daughter; the two started courting. The ranch owner, not wanting his daughter to marry a native man (because everyone was racist in the 1870s), fired Elijah, who then went on to become a hired arms and a bounty hunter.
He’s now 21, he's a guard for a bank stagecoach, headed from valentine to strawberry. They get robbed by O'Driscolls, as the area's infested with them. Elijah, on a rage blinded whim, kills four of them, chasing off the rest, abandoning the stage.
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For me, there wasn't enough options. My character is basically an alien, who looks like a human, but is extremely powerful. He doesn't have a lot of skills, but he is very trained in fighting( Like Martial Arts) he is also a very good engineer (Alien Advantage). Although he is a "Alien", he really looks like a very muscular human. His backstory origin is more than I can fit in this comment. But. He comes from a different galaxy( Planet) which is around. 1.2 billion light years, a lot but I have my reason. He has a lot of up and downs. He's trained since age 4, and in the story he's 16. So that's 12 years of hard, rough, nearly dying, exercises. He's not boring or dull in my eyes. We just need way more options.
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My oc:
Fawn has a normal life but is a little blind due to poison being accidentally spilt in her eyes. She has special correcting glasses, and the lenses are made of a magical crystal mentioned in my OC backstory. Brown hair, gray eyes that used to be pastel yellow, no makeup except mascara, jacket and jeans. Bff is Quartz and Dusk
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Its a gacha life OC
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well, his name is Kazuya.
not how strong or weak.he is equipped with a katana sword as a protector of his life.
he has an arctic fox pet named Ichi. small, and adorable, she is very useful in his missions.
His appearance only uses black uniform and white haori.
I'm not sure if it's look normal according to you. he has cyan-colored hair, iris which is also commensurate with the color of his hair.
That is all
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Apparently my oc despite getting a 51 was good, which I find kind of odd lol.
My oc is a beast/cat named wasp, who's a blond cat with leg stripes. They were born to a cat and a beast, but their mother didn't know of their fathers different species. This caused her to get quite upset which they found wasp being born with odd massive teeth and striking, purple beast eyes. They were born along their sister bee, but she only got the eyes which let it be passed off as just born sorta funky. After about 2 months of this, Wasp's mother sent wasp out with their father quickly. A young wasp was confused, thinking they had done something wrong.
The cats around them expected wasp to become of great power, but wasp was a very gentle cat. So wasp ended up leaving to live as a loner. They were ashamed of their beast feature's, always closing their eyes and wearing a mask to hide the teeth. They also wear a cloak to make their mane seem smaller. I only really have a backstory for this oc, as I usually use em to rp on felandia in Roblox.
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My OC was originally for a dungeons and dragons group after school, but I wanted to use it more than that. Apparently my OC is pretty boring, so I might change it up a bit.
His appearance is more interesting than his personality because he's an elf and I wanted him to look cool. Great quiz btw, I enjoyed it!
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Your OC isn't boring! That's just what the quiz says! This quiz doesn't have enough questions!
BearAi322
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It said your character has no flaws so 9% good let's see here..... Arms stuck to body moves slowly because of weight due to poison gas inside him in constant pain horribly scarred and mutated... Nah he has a perfect life
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dang thats sad.
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Hi yes hello Im a bit late to this but I should say; just because your character is in pain that sounds negative doesnt immediately make them a good character. You have to explain why and how does it effect them other than big pain, big sad. How do they live with this? How do they cope, how does their character adapt to this? Just because theyre in pain does not make them a fully fleshed out dynamic character.
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That is not a good life, this quiz should get more questions.
BearAi322
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This quiz is... ok.
My OC is a gacha life OC, and her "unique" name is Omega, there is some kind of prophecy about Greek numeric names, she has long brown hair (when she unleashes her full power), her clothes are, well, she wears dark gray shorts with a hoody hanging over it, and the top is... I'm not sure how to explain it.
This quiz doesn't have enough options.
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I agree
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name: Pebble
Age: 2,400 (she looks 13 in her human form)Species: Alien (she can take the form of a 13-year-old person after accidentally killing her while crashing her ship)
human appearance: pinecone skin with fluffy black hair and a sanriocore outfit, purple eyes, and purple glasses
Alien: a pastel yellow skin tone with black fluffy hair purple eyes and purple glasses.
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I felt like there had to be more options. Like an other option. My PC wears a top hat and I had to stick with normal generic clothes because I didn't have enough options to describe him. Likewise, I didn't feel like there were enough questions on the personality. There is a lack of options. My main issue was that there was no "other" option to be seen. And I really want to tell you about my oc but I don't want to bore you with the details. Also the purpose should have more options.
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Im very ticked of, it says that my oc is plain!!!
Heres som information about her,
Name:Luna Hirigashi (yes Hirigashi as in her mother is Kagome DONT JUGE ME! )
Has 6 step siblings, yes they are InuYasha and kikios kids, InuYasha is Lunas dad, AND NO HE DIDNOT CHEAT ON KAGOME THEY GOT SEPARATED(she also died( ahem.. Luna killed her))
Luna has very long black hair but when she transforms she turns into a half demon, and no she cannot control her transformation, just like InuYasha she transforms when she has gone insane, she cares the tesiga( Her fathers Sword (it was left behind))
She also has one yellow eye and one purple one, she has the same powers as her mother pluz her fathers, BUT AS I SAID SHE CANOT CONTROL THEM SO WHEN SHE USES THEM SHE ENDS UP MURDEING SOMBODY! SO SHE IS NOT A MARY SUE!!!! she is also not on any tipe of media, online or anywhere, only a character that I have Im my head! Same with all my other OCs! Luna is the first oc I have ever came up with. She is very special to me, so if you say anything offensive or call her a Mary Sue then I will defend myself!!!!
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So is she still plain!?
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She's not plain. That's just what the quiz says! This quiz is so bad, because they're not enough questions!
BearAi322
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It said my oc was pretty well balanced, but it didn't really give me the options that i hoped for, my oc is skilled in martial arts, and has a lot of street smarts but the only option with martial arts it had was with the being skilled in everything, basically not enough options
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I'm using this comment section to yap about Elijah (THIS QUIZ DOESNT HAVE ENOUGH OPTIONS BTW HE DOESNT HAVE ANY PETS.)
OK so I answered based off him at the end of his life cus that's where I write about him the most at but he's technically a linear character soo...
DESCRIPTION: he has long black grey streaked hair (as he is like 50 so keep this in mind when imagining him), and he has soft brown skin and brown eyes. there's this big chunk out of his cheek/nose bridge cus of when he was younger and he's a gunslinger/outlaw so he's decently muscular and pretty built but once again he's 50 so he has the old man fat too right. ok ok ok ok I love elijah so much y'all don't even get it anyways have fun reading his lore frlsies
His father, a native man who joined the wapiti tribe along with a few other members of his previous one after theirs was wiped out, was killed when he was four years old, so he was left with his sister, Delilah, who was twelve at the time, and his mother. He can't remember his father very well, so the only thing this really affects is his cultural knowledge.
When he was 17, his mother and sister were killed during a train robbery, they were both shot down by the O'Driscolls robbing said train. Elijah escaped luckily, but he ended up killing for the first time, having to bash the head of a man who tackled him down while he was running.
He worked at emerald ranch for 2 years after that, with the promise of a home to stay in, though he ended up falling in love with the ranch owner's daughter; the two started courting. The ranch owner, not wanting his daughter to marry a native man (because everyone was racist in the 1870s), fired Elijah, who then went on to become a hired arms and a bounty hunter.
He’s now 21, he's a guard for a bank stagecoach, headed from valentine to strawberry. They get robbed by O'Driscolls, as the area's infested with them. Elijah, on a rage blinded whim, kills four of them, chasing off the rest, abandoning the stage.
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Okay so! You need to add more options, like my character has gray hair but it's dyed also-- You forced me to say the character is for roleplay even though I create a story with her and I don't even reveal that character in any roleplaying game.
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Your character is 51% good 51%
Your character is well rounded and looks like readers can relate to him/her. Keep your OC just as it is, because it's one of the few good ones.
Excuse me, but my OC has literally killed somebody and is a bit insane. Not entirely insane, but somewhat there.
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I made an OC for my world and their natural eye colors are gold, black, brown, and sometimes green. And when I see the unusual eye colors it doesn't have an option of whether or not it's natural.
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Well, there weren't enough questions. I ended up getting a 21% and it said my character was so perfect that they were imperfect.
Some of the info of my OC is not in this comment.
My OC is very quiet, and he doesn't come out a whole lot.
Their hair is black leading (in umbrae mode) to a dark blue (at tips of hair). They're eye color is black, and their iris is white that looks like marble. They're nocturnal. They're also born thousands of years after you (if he existed, then he wouldn't be alive right now). He had a horrible past life. Which is why there are ALOT of scars on him (Well, he has 3 pasts lives but I'm not going to explain that). He's not boring to me. You all can tell me what you think.
BearAi320-
If you need more info, then fine.
Age of death: 18 (sad)
Nickname: Night
Pros: Powerful
Cons: Evil(They do evil in order to do good, so they are... a good villian???)
They have more info (and more cons and pros) but you're just gonna need to ask. If there is any problems please tell me.
BearAi321
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The unusual eye thing. There are grey eyes in this world. Not many have them, but it makes it seem like I'm talking about purple eyes or something like that. Plus, I didn't make my OC for any of the purposes. I just make OC's for fun.
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There are only options for human OCs. Mine is a furry, so it's hard to asnwer some questions. So I recommend to put some questions for people who has non-human OC!
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Omg, I thought my character was better than this! Now that I think about it, they are kinda a "Mary sue" character.
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Really? My advice is that you're not asking the right questions. Otherwise not too bad.
Thatone1 -
66% I didnt think the ultimate puppet master(riko who is my danganronpa oc)was that well! People can relate to her? SHE LIKES EATING TOMATOES LIKE APPLES! LIKE FREAKING APPLES!
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You should really add an other button because some things my OC doesn’t have at all! For example you forced us to give our OC a pet.
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There wasnt enough options tbh
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73% Let's go Hashtag!!
Caaji1-
My charter got 66%! Dont get mad think about ocs before making them official!
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71% uh- I'll just put the link
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