Big Girls Dont Cry Part #8 | Comments

Umm you asked me to check your series out, and so i did, it's really short, it's like part 6, 7, and 8 could fit into one quiz, not seperate ones. Like me i don't prepare my series before i make it, but it's long and fun, i think, you rewrite this series on your laptop or book, really think about the plot, describe the guys more, have more descriptions, and not rush. To me it feels rushed, and feels like it's trying to please the readers by making it like other series, it should be fun, take your time to rewrite it, don't try to copy other series like this, cause to tell you the truth, i've seen series like yours here on gtq, and most of them were horrible because they tried copying other people, be you and original. That's just my opinion, check other series and see the difference between them like mine Never From Ordinary, or Dannica's Beautiful Secrets

Now that was AWESOME you could of actually made the long paragraph into 3 short paragraph oh whatever I LOVED cant wait till the next one

It would be really awesome if u could actually fill in more question boxes than just one.

OMG PLZ CONTINUE THE SERIES!! IWILL DIE IF U DONT CONTINUE XD this iS SUCH a good series! :3 cant wait 4 the next part. (Daniel sounds cute XD)

continue...CONTINUE !!!!!