Dark heart book one Thistle part 2 | Comments
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Whoa.
Seth seems cute and all but he's probably dangerous. I really wonder what will happen :3
Try to put more detail and feelings into your writing. And instead of the result, you could ask a question, talk about your feelings, summarize, open up, and thank the reader. That's what I do.
Lily is so protective of me. She's such a good friend. Will there be other boys? Seth isn't much of my favorite being all that persistent in saying sorry. Maybe something's up.
Sorry it took so long. I had school and 2 tests and a project. On each of those tests, I got 1 mark off for silly mistakes D:
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thanks and i will bring out part 3 soon i have exam to study on for now and hopefully it will be out soon and i think i might add more guys to make it more interesting.
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well i'm going to post part 3 up today
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