Goodbye...part 20

So I think I did that in third person, yeah I did. Anyway tell me what you think of third person. QUESTION: Should I keep doing it in third person. BOOKS you should read. Fallen, torment, Passion and Rapture by Lauren Kate. I am reading rapture now

So I think I did that in third person, yeah I did. Anyway tell me what you think of third person. QUESTION: Should I keep doing it in third person. BOOKS you should read. Fallen, torment, Passion and Rapture by Lauren Kate. I am reading rapture now.

Created by: singin234
  1. {This is going to be written in third person. Just his one} Rosella stood there shocked, she was in her own mind. So this forest was in her mind. Could they kill her in her mind? Rosella wondered, she stared at Zach's face. He looked nervous, Brad also looked nervous. "I can't believe I trapped in my mind," Rosella said shaking her head. "how do we get out" She asked. The birds stopped talking, the bugs stopped crawling. Everything seemed to slow down for Rosella. "Well we have to find you most greatfulmoment in your life and bring you there. So that you can go back to the real world" Zach told her nervously, sweat was dripping down off his heads. "I think we should split up, because Hazel I think you are making Zach sweat" Brad told her looking At Zach. He looked sick. "Okay" Rosella told them and walked off. It was better that way. So they don't find out, who she is.
  2. "You idiot" Raven shouted at Dane, Dane had got them lost. He had been holding the map The wrong way. How do people get this dumb? Raven wondered as Dane just went at yelling at her. "Shut up" Jev said in a tone they never thought wad possible for him. Raven stared to feel a bit scared, Jev garbbed the map from Dane's hand. Ripping it in half, "Let's split up. Dane and Raven will go north and Chris and I will go south" Jev told them. At lest thy are listenning, Jev thought as Raven and Dane glumly walked over to the car and drove away. "Are you sure that was a good idea. To put them to together" Chris asked him as they Walked over to two Guys with motorbikes. Jev shrugged "I don't know. We just have to get to Rosella," Jev told him then turned to the two big bulit guys. "Hey we need your motorbikes"
  3. Rosella sighed as she walked past more trees. Everything looks the same, she thought. Her legs grew tried and the sky above her was setting. It was almost the end of her birthday, time seemed to moving faster. Well for Rosella. Three days, isn't alot of time. Rosella thought, is it possiable to feel sleepy in your mind? She wondered. She made her way to a small cave, it was coved in trees, grass, lefts and some mud. She realized his was from her past. A past life, she walked deep into the cave where darkness surrounded her.
  4. Why did Jev set me up with Raven, Dane wondered as he drove North. They are going to have to find the way to the gate to get into the other world, somehow. Dane though, we will have to find the clue. Raven looked out the window, no one talked but the sound of the motor filled their ears. "This is Dumb," Raven blurlted out. "It's your flut this is happening. You could of killed Zach. You could o saved me, saved Rosella. We wouldn't even be here. We would be....happy and alive" Raven voice cracked, her words were mumbled. "Where would the clue be" Dane asked changing the subject. He had never thought about it that way, maybe it was all his fult. "If we are looking for a magic gate to get to evil. Wouldn't we go to the dead. I meant there is a gate there, evil killed some of those people" Raven suggested, it made sense. Dane thought, "Okay the one at Willson" He told her and kept driving.
  5. They laughed at Jev, "Yeah make us" The one on the right laughed. Then they both fell onto the ground, Jev looked behind then to see Chris holding a baseball bat. "Where the heck did you get that" Jev asked pointing to the metal baseball bat. Chris smirked and took the keys from the men. "Well these carry around baseball bats. I think they rob or something" Chris told him. Jev was pretty sure he was lying but Decied not to ask again. "We are going south, where would we find the clue" Jev asked. Chris looked up at the sky "Well going North would lead you to Willson. We are looking for a pond. A magic one, so we would get the clue from-" "The local pool" Jev cut him off. Getting money and other sudd from the bikers. "Okay let's go" Chris said and stared up his bike. Then they stared riding.
  6. "Hello" Rosella called out, soon she cane to two doors. One was white and in gold writing it had 'Heaven' The other one was red and in black writting had 'Hell'. Rosella shook her head "I don't Beileve in Hell" She yelled. Then another door came up before her eyes. The doors glowed in the dark, this door was half white and half red. On the white Half in gold was written 'Future' and on the red side in black was written 'Past' Rosella stood there puzzled, they must be talking about me. She thought, she opened the door and walked in.
  7. Rosella quietly kept walking, frist off she was a purple blanket on a stood. Just sitting there, it was from her past. It must be when I was baby, she thought. Before she could pick it up, she herd footsteps. Well light little ones. Walking down the hall was a tiny dragon. It was purple, sliver and black. It flew up and landed on Rosella's shoulder. "Hello" she said to it and touched the blanket.
  8. The ground moved, Zach most falling onto Brad. "What was that" Zach asked Brad, he turned to see Brad's face. It was White in fear, "Rosella is in hazel's mind" Brad told him. Zach shook his head "No. We have been tricked Rosella is Hazel. And Rosella is close to finding out the truth"
  9. That's the end of part 20!
  10. So I think I did that in third person, yeah I did. Anyway tell me what you think of third person. QUESTION: Should I keep doing it in third person. BOOKS you should read. Fallen, torment, Passion and Rapture by Lauren Kate. I am reading Rapture now.

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