Stuck With Each Other [Literate/Semi-Literate Roleplay]
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Thread Topic: Stuck With Each Other [Literate/Semi-Literate Roleplay]
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Runnerfiend Newbie" No , i hate hunters and i am half-demon and i can feel your emotions and feelings cause i have that kind of perception and magic so right now you are feeling is emitting hatred so i can guess that demon hunters some how ruined your life and i know how you feel even tho i never went through that life " said Jackson with a hint of calmness and his body relaxes
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August Dimenichi NewbieAlex stiffens. “I don’t like this. I don’t like you, and I don’t like how smug and smart you think you are.” He hissed, stepping closer to Chris. “I just got rid of all my baggage and I don’t need you to remind me of it."
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Ganz trilled quietly and the raptor like half demon sniffed at her hand before his head snapped around to look at the stranger when he heard him, fire rippling though his fur as he snarled at him
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“ you’re not answering my questions.” Chris said as he aims his gun at the paralysed males left knee. “ I am a demon hunter, and you are scum.” The boy said coldly as he fired out one of knee caps.
“ we’re taking him down to the cellar, clearing out my house, and then we’re deciding what to do with him.”
Eliza grabbed the boy , using her earth body, to cover herself.
“ Alex is right. You’re really pissing me off.” The huge women growled.
Selene snappe dher fingers blindfolding the intruder, -
Trix backed into a corner
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Runnerfiend NewbieJackson knew it was the right nice to make them move away before the arch demon found them cause he knew arch demon hated any other half demons that are pure and knew will kill all kinds of demon hunters and half demon and he knew pissing them off was the only way to get them to move and One thing he is very clear of is that , last time a arch demon was killed I took an army of half demons to do it and knew he and this group of people are doomed unless they can find an army
Jackson tenses as he feels a huge wave of demonic energy just a few miles away from the manor and felt the others tenses as well and said " I tell you one thing , is that we better get the he'll out of here before that thing comes and I know if we don't start moving that thing will definitely kill us and I should have told you early but I need you guys help " -
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I agree with the above statememt. I only understood like 5% of that)
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Runnerfiend NewbieOk tell what's wrong
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Grammar, mostly. The second half is easier to read, but the first part is just kinda a mess.
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August Dimenichi NewbieYeah, please fix that grammatically and then I'll post))
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Runnerfiend NewbieSorry
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Runnerfiend NewbieJackson knew it was the right move to make them move away before the arch demon found them because he knew that arch demons hated any half demons that are impure and knew will kill all kinds of demon hunters and half demon and he knew pissing them off was the only way to get them to move and One thing he is very clear of is that , last time a arch demon was killed I took an army of half demons to do it and knew he and this group of people are doomed unless they can find an army
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Runnerfiend NewbieStill ok ??
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