The Coffee Shop
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Thread Topic: The Coffee Shop
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I think it's best that you write about opening the coffee shop, designing the coffee shop, connections to the tragedy, etc. then I come in after your coffee shop gets popular.
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SadnessKimberly Novicecan I do it in First person?
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Sure
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SadnessKimberly NoviceI walked in my new coffee and looked around. "Only one more day" I thought to myself. The coffee shop was pretty big, well it depends who you are. If your big then you probably think its small. And if you Small then you probably think it is big. The furniture truck was here with all my supplies, Tables, shelfs, chairs, etc. I looked out the door and guestered for them to come in. They brought in a table nd placed it on the left side of the room. The right side was where I worked; and people got their coffee from. Then in the center stood a little pathway that leads to our back porch sitting area. On the left, is where we put all our other tables. I turnd to see that they were done. alredy? "Thank you" I said, as the walked.out. I smiled at the sight of the shop. It remided me of how my mom used to come here everyday. Until it happend. A tear ran down my cheek nd I took the subject off my mind. Tommorow was a big day. No time to cry.
(Good so far? I am really bad at these... I am not done yet) -
(Good. Maybe describe your plain for customers, the colors of the coffee shop, how the outside looks, and what pastries you want to sell next. I'll be some customers after that.)
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SadnessKimberly Novicesorry gtg eat
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(Okay.)
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