Five Races
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Thread Topic: Five Races
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Lyn smashed a potion on him and they flickered back into reality " My Orc eyes see through all illusions and that is not an illusion" she sighed " Can we just get on with this quest I'd prefer to get back to my father before his sickness kills him!" She said gaining a crack in her voice " And my Hannah is the only thing left other than my necklace of my dearly beloved mother' she growled.
" You're not a Mage" -
Redlew said "S-s-she's right. Let's go." Redlew started off for the center of the forest.
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Slayerbrine NoviceDilock grabbed hannah"don't even think about it I need my map"he said"And orc eyes can't see through some illusions like mine they went back into a reality marble"Now my map"He said furious"by the way my mom was a mage and my dad a swordsman I learned from them that orc eyes can't see through ilusions if they don't want too but dragons have too now map"a few scales of light grew on him
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She slapped him hard enough knocking the wind out of him and she gentley took Hannah back.
" Y-You monster" she said her voice cracking " Y-You K-Killed her!" She yelled.
She took them back into reality as she broke down " You know nothing of Orcs! " she cried as Hannah glowed green and turned gray as her power transferred into Gylnda who stood up " Let's go enough time is being wasted with this foolishness" she said " Make one more mistake like taht and I will destroy the map!" She threatened darkly as she held her best friends cold body to her chest. -
Redlew took Hannah and his hand glowed green. He used a healing pulse to bring Hannah back to life and it worked.
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Slayerbrine NoviceThe reality marble worked and Dilock's Eyes turned completely glowing blue"When will you get it a reality marble can't be broken by anything you do"he said his voice sounded deeper and monsterous"only I can bring it down"he breathe fire and lightning on redlew's hand and hannah caught on fire as dilock started to grow wings"That's right I'M A MONSTER"he said and swords pointing at lyn and a few swords let go and stabbed a her rats and baskets"YOU MADE A MISTAKE YOUR LAST MISTAKE!!!!!"he fully truned into a dragon and made a terrifying roar(the map cannot be destroyed
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Uhm I think this is an overpowered character and incredibly annoying )
Lyn picked him up and threw him into the sky cracking the marble freeing them " And you did!" She cackled before she began to walk in the proper direction.
" You don't deserve to be the leader if you're as bad as the darkness" -
(I agree and why is he transforming now? I said in dire situations or extreme distress they transform, not annoyance. Plus your character isn't showing the personality you gave it which was, Cool, calm, kind, generous, and impatient.)
Redlew grabbed the charred remains of Hannah and hid them. He grabbed Lyn's hand and began to run for a place to hide. -
( Also a leader ( even if a co ) wouldn't do that to someone on their team clearly, Lyn has emotional attachment to Hannah ))
( Lyn is an Orc and the Brawns of the group so if you're physically stinger than her something she has trained to accomplish then you're over powering your character which is why I'm making sure to keep her intelligence level behind Redlews) -
Slayerbrine Novice(I know how a reaity marble works and unless you can break 1000 acres of land in one shot you can't break it also he has some anger issues)The marble didn't break and there was no place to hide swords flew from there spots and charged at you(of course you could deplemish my mana)
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Lyn ran with him but she pulled an oblivion potion out of her bag and mixed it with a lighting potion and an angelic potion turning it into a siren call potion something that was both dangerous and healing.
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(That still doesn't explain why he's doing this.)
Redlew found a secluded cave that was behind a small waterfall. He and Lyn ran inside. He used a cloaking device to aid hiding. -
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I'm skipping him because he's not been on for thirteen hours)
" This is wasting important time" she said " Di you think the darkness got to him throw his magical item?" She aksed " There's an old legend about dragon fever and that's why I took the map a dragons magical item can taint them but it also can happen to orcs I'm immune to it due to being raised by humans as humans have the biggest lust for power out of the five races , but of course I still get selfish" she chuckled softly " Hannah will be fine I can't explain how but she isn't bound to the rules of regular creatures her magic is stronger than Dilocks but she can't interfere with us directly , she is only able to warn me of dangers but never how to defeat them" -
(I would've thought he'd show up by now.)
Redlew said "I don't know but I do know the only way we are getting out of this dimension is if we can calm down Dilock." He pulled out the charred remains and used his heal pulse again. Hannah was alive but covered in soot. "Here you go." said Redlew, giving Hannah to Lyn.
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