Careless Errors
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Thread Topic: Careless Errors
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Fandomfreak NewbieClaire felt her eyes water as she clenched her fists. "You... you b------!" She yelled, standing as she pushed her way out. She never should have cared! She should have let John hurt him! She never should have opened her heart! After losing her sister, you'd think she'd have learned! She fled to the west wing corridor and slid against the wall. "No use for me?!" She thought. "Am I just a tool?!"
Jeff shuddered and stared as the girl ran out. "What's her problem?" He muttered, twirling his kitchen knife around his finger's before noticing the one she had held and the blood covered floor. "Huh? Damn, could've killed that b*tch..." he sighed. -
Hunter felt his heart lurch for Claire, but he had to keep the fasaude he was holding. Hunter looked at Jeff and growled. "Long time no see." he said staring at Jeff's lifeless eyes.
John fell to the floor as he remembered his real name. See, the hospital gave him the name John Doe when he was admitted, because they didn't know it. His real name was Lui and he had a brother named Jeff. He let out a sadistical laugh as he went to find and kill...Claire. -
Fandomfreak NewbieClaire curled up and cried quietly, once again hating herself. Why couldn't Alice had lived? Why couldn't that creature have taken her life instead?! She held her face in her hands as she rocked herself, trying to provide some sort of comfort.
Jeff nodded in reply. "Great to see you too." He said, sarcasm practically dripping from his voice. He put his knife in his hoodie pocket and shrugged. "So, we breaking you out or what?" -
Fandomfreak NewbieDo me a favor. Call me McKenzie. :) )
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Hunter smiled at the greeting. "That would be a yes." he said nodding. "Also, you do know your brother is here, right?" Hunter walked toward Jeff, taking few steps. "Or what was left of him." he muttured.
Lui looked around for Claire, but saw no trace of her. He looked around for a weapon and saw none. "Dammit." he muttured. What was he going to kill her with? More or less, how was he going to kill her. -
Fandomfreak NewbieClaire shakily stood and stumbled slightly, dizzy from the blood loss from her arms. She took a few steps before falling forward and hitting her head, falling unconscious.
Jeff tensed. "So, Liu's here, huh? Maybe I should just end him..." he muttered, gripping the handle of his knife so tight that his knuckles popped -
Hunter shrugged and then looked at Jeff. "Maybe you should, maybe you shouldn't." he looked at Jeff with a harsh glare in his eyes. There are many things, even Jeff didn't understand.
Lui finally stumbled across Claire and grinned as he stood over her unconsiouss body. "FInally, revenge is mine." -
Fandomfreak NewbieClaire's breathing was deep and even, whilst blood stained her white dress. Her ankle was twisted and the black flats she wore had fallen off, the scars that seemed to have been invisible showing in the way the lighting hit her body.
Jeff shrugged, supressing another shudder. He began walking, looking for his older brother, wishing he had killed him when he had the chance. He took out his knife and held it tightly at his side. -
Hunter walked outside, hoping Jeff would follow behind. That was when his heart began racing. "Where was Claire?" he thought.
Lui stood over Claire's body and smiled. "Good-bye, dear." he said, his voice having a hint of hatred in it. -
Fandomfreak NewbieClaire groaned quietly and opened her eyes. She noticed the shadow that stretched across her and sat up before letting out a shrill scream. "John, no!" She begged, her eyes wide with terror.
As predicted, Jeff followed Hunter, thinking he was going to lead him to his brother. If Che could, he may have just cried. He didn't like the thought of ending Liu, but their could be no witnesses. -
Hunter noticed two figures down the hall. One was on the floor and the other was standing over the other. Hunter rushed down the hall and tackled the figure that was standing. It was John, but he looked...different.
Liu landed on the ground and his headed bounced on the floor twice. It took him a couple of seconds to realize that Jeff was standing over him. -
Fandomfreak NewbieClaire pressed herself to the wall, curled up with her arms wrapped around her petite frame as if it would hide her. She was trembling like a leaf, and her head felt like it was going to explode.
Jeff stared down at his elder brother, his smile pulled down slightly, making it obvious he was attempting to frown, but couldn't due to the smile forever carved in his face. "Liu." He said quietly, paying no attention to anyone but him. -
Hunter looked at Claire and sat beside her. 'Everything will be alright. I promise.' he said, hoping his words wouldn't fall into the void where his words usally fell.
Liu looked up at Jeff and his body slightly tremored. "Hello..brother." he said, spitting out the last word with a putrid hatred. Liu slid back, then stood. -
Fandomfreak NewbieClaire clung to him sobbing. She felt so weak... she continued trembling, though his words did have somewhat of a calming effect.
Jeff pinned Liu down, holding his knife to his neck. "Any last words, big brother?" He cooed, pressing the blade into his neck.
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