Continue the story.....
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Thread Topic: Continue the story.....
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Dead_end NewbieHe walked on, his usual sluggish speed, beads of sweat now making their way down his cheeks. He put his hands, rooving his forehead; partly to hide himself from the fiery sun and partly to hide his blackened eye from the nearby peering passerby. He was disgusted, scared, embarassed and feeling helpless when suddenly his good eye caught hold of a wondrous sight.....
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Hey, uh, this story sounds cool and all, but, could you possibly put down a plot. I really don't understand the setting here and who you and I are supposed to be, so I'd appreciate it. Thanks.
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Dead_end NewbieThe thing is I wanted to try out sth difrnt where maybe anyone and everyone could make a bit of the plot and lead the story on. Like maybe, write a post of the next thing that's going to happen in the story the way u look at it, twist and turns, be it tragic, comic or romantic.... Interested?
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Okay, sounds cool.
She strolled on by, her tacky shoes clicking away. Each step frustrated her more, knowing that those shoes infuriated her. They were out of style and-
Something caught her eye. A boy, covering his face, raced past her, seemingly timid. She watched with glowing eyes as he stormed away. Surprisingly, he suddenly halted and trailed his head upwards. I followed his glance and stared at the sight. -
Dead_end NewbieHe stared at her momentarily with one eye covered by his right hand but what was a moment seemed like an eternity as his eyes journeyed through her perfectly slim but with that slight curvy figure. Her bright blue eyes glowed, her curly brunette locks grooving by themselves with the help of the mild breeze, that perforated blue jeans complementing her white shirt, everything about her was a new mystery to him. But the thing that caused him to remove his hand from the eye were those stunning pair of bright red wedges she wore; he just loved them. And that was enough for him to gather a handful of courage to go up to her and manage out a small talk....
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He returned, this time with his face exposed. His bruise on his left eye seemed brutal, and made her wince. Lips pursed, eyes gloomily shining, and arms swaying, he got closer. Wait, he's coming closer. What is he doing? Perhaps he simply lost his way.
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Dead_end Newbie'Hey, how much did u get those shoes for?' he asked, suddenly realising it was the most stupid thing a guy could ask to a girl. This should be in Guiness book of world records, he thought.
'I mean, I l-o-ve th-ose shoes o-n u. They're a-mazing,' he quickly added with a shaky voice.
He could see her eyes wearing an awestruck expression and he waited for a reply, thinking to himself about what an ass he made out of himself....
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