Falling in love with your bff.
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Thread Topic: Falling in love with your bff.
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ok This girl is best friends with a guy since they were 2 years old. He is a nice and sweet friend. The girl is crazy and always playing around with the guy but not in a crush way. Her friends are having a sleepover with her. They dare her to get on this site kinda like facebook and make a fake account. She does it because she will do anything you ask here to do. She finds the guys friends account and texts him on it. But really it's the guy and she does not know. Things get out of hand and her and the guys friend (the guy) fall in love. Her friends leave and she still texts him. When the girl gos back to school her and the guy are friends that don't know. One day the guy text the girl and wants to meet the her at a park. When then she sees it was her best friend. Now she has deal with her best friend in love with her.
I can do better being the girl instead of the guy if you don't mind. -
Anyone in?
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Well i'm going to make my person
Name- Emma ann smith
Eyes-whiteish blue
Hair- brown perfectly straight and also in a curly pony tail or a french braid
Skin- light tan
Lips- light red
Age-16
Acts- funny,smart,clueless and shy
Wears- mostly flats,jean and a tank top
Likes- fruit,water,hair,make up,outside,friends and dogs
Dislikes-drama,jerks, bugs,snakes,pine apple,dirt
Other- can sing pretty. Cheerlends and loves to go horse back riding. -
Not joining, but just gonna state my opinion.
THIS IS NOT MEANT TO OFFEND YOU. PLEASE DON'T TAKE IT PERSONALLY.
I personally feel like your character is a bit of a Mary-Sue.
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Who is that?
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Urban Dictionary definition:
Mary-Sue. A female character who is so perfect as to be annoying. The male equivlalent is the Marty-Stu. Often abbreviated to "Sue". A Mary Sue character is usually written by a beginning author. Often, the Mary Sue is a self-insert with a few "improvements" (ex. better body, more popular, etc). The Mary Sue character is almost always beautiful, smart, etc... In short, she is the "perfect" girl. The Mary Sue usually falls in love with the author's favorite character(s) and winds up upstaging all of the other characters in the book/series/universe. There are several main types of Mary Sue:
Victim!Sues: The Victim!Sue is your whiny, wimpy, pathetic female character who can't seem to do much of anything except cry and get herself into trouble that the romantic interest of the fic has to rescue her from.
Warrior!Sues: The Warrior!Sue is usually loud, obnoxious and (of course) an amazing warrior. She'll usually have some tragic past that led her to become a warrior, and she'll upstage all of the Canonical characters with her mad Sueish powerz.
Mage!Sue: Similar to the Warrior!Sue, the Mage!Sue has amazing stregnth in magic, or has a magical power that nobody else has. She'll usually wind up upstaging all of the magical characters of the series.
Punk!Sue: Also called Noncomformist!Sue or Goth!Sue, the Punk!Sue is usually written by female beginners in the 11-15 age group. The Punk!Sue is loud, obnoxious, annoying and generally the type of person who you'd want to send off to boot camp for six months. The Punk!Sue almost always has angst coming out of her ears and isn't really a bad person, she's just oh!-so-angry at whatever tragic past the author has chosen to give her. The Punk!Sue is based on what the 11-15 year old author thinks is "cool" and wishes she could be. This includes Evil!Sues.
Misfit!Sue: This includes all Sues who are supposedly geeks, nerds, misfits, etc. Usually, the Misfit!Sue doesn't start out as inhumanly beautiful, but winds up getting a makeover and finding out she had the potential to be a guy-magnet (or girl-magnet, depending on the genre) all along. Also includes the "My parents want me to do this but I want to do that and it's not fair!!one!" type of Sue. Usually, this Sue is very bookish and smart, but will find some sort of physical talent nobody expected and become a star as a result.
Another thing to note is that a Sue will usually have a completely off-the-wall name, like "Viquetoria". The more wierd and pretentious the name of the character, the more likely it is that she's a Sue.
Finally, Sues often have wierd, improbable or impossible bloodlines. A secret half-elf child of Elrond and a nameless human would be an example of this. A character who was Dumbledore's grandchild and Tom Riddle's daughter would be another example.
The character in the HP fanfic was a complete and utter Sue. She moved across the street from Harry. She was beautiful, smart and pretty. They fell in wuv almost immediately. She threw all of the characters out of character and generally upstaged everyone. It was quite obnoxious. -
A Mary Sue is a character who is unrealistic, perfect, or without weaknesses. She may have weaknesses, but they are perfect weaknesses, cliched ones.
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I don't see anything wrong but when I said perfectly.
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Oh I get it now.
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Ok let me make that character again
Name-Emma ann smith
Age-16
Eyes- very light blue
Hair-brown always in a pony tail or french braid
Wears- work clothes, jeans, flats and a tank top
Skin-really pale
Acts- shy,kinda dorky and always happy
Likes-dogs,water,fruits and the outside
Dislikes- bees,bugs,jerks,drama
Other- works at her aunts stable, is very clumsy,bike reads, sometimes acts like a 30 year old. -
:( anyone?
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Please I love the story line!
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Leah?
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_Leah_ NewbieI'm really not usecd togroup soaps, but I guess I could try...
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It's not a group soap. Just go and read everything. Then make your boy character.
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