I could really use a critique

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Thread Topic: I could really use a critique

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  barberbob2 Senior

  11 years ago
  I just wrote a rough draft in the library for the first part of a horror story I want to write. It would mean a lot to me if you guys would read over it and tell me what you think.
  
  
  
  Thank you.

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