I need help, please.

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Thread Topic: I need help, please.

• LemonLime Novice

  12 years ago
  I need to figure out a title for my new story I'm working on and planning to post here on GTQ. It's pretty much a mysterious kind of story. This girl experiences unkown things and sees a little girlall the time, but it was just a faint memory haunting her. Here's a "sneak peak".
  
  I ran to where she stood and pushed her into the grass beside the road, I fell next to her. I got up and helped her stand, I stared at her, "You ok?" I asked. "You didn't have to do that," She mumbled. "What-you wanted to die?" "Come here!" My mom yelled, standing at the front door. I looked back at her, "Hold on!" I turned my head back. She wasn't there. I looked around, but I couldn't see her. "Hey!" I turned in circles. It's like she had...disappeared...
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  Nuna Experienced

  12 years ago
  Why dont you call it "A Haunting Memory"
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  Nuna Experienced

  12 years ago
  or "The Unseen"
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  Caught Ya Newbie

  12 years ago
  "To See Or To Not."
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  Dark22978 Experienced

  12 years ago
  "Tales of The Unspoken"
• LemonLime Novice

  12 years ago
  Oh, all good ideas.
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  DaughterOfApollo Advanced

  12 years ago
  That was part of your other story, "Death's Aroma". I think that's what it's called.
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  TooCoolForU Novice

  12 years ago
  "Talking Softly."
• LemonLime Novice

  12 years ago
  Megan, yes it was. Glad you noticed ^.* I'm going to be re-writting it, proper grammer, better detailed, everything. I've became such a better writter, and I know I can improve it. I want to continue that story, but better. Maybe different, very, different. But the same idea.
  
  I like "The Unseen" and "Unspoken"
• LemonLime Novice

  12 years ago
  .
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  Teresa22 Senior

  12 years ago
  Gone

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