Someone Read Ma Story:]
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Thread Topic: Someone Read Ma Story:]
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A Girls American dream
Chapter 1 Freek out
"Dinner!" Said my mom.As she hit the Spoon on the Pot.Nyle Ran down the Stairs,He triped as he ran.My mom knew She wanted to Lol but instead She She Lis:Laugh inside.I Looked at my plate i Frownd at the Food.She Asked"G What's Wrong?" i Changed my Frown.I slowly ate my Food,"Glorea." My mom Said"is'ent this Delitious?" I Looked up and Smiled.After dinner i ran up to my Room.Nyle kept Banging on my Door,i Banged Back.My Mom Looked at both of us, We knew We Were grouned For 3 Months.I slamed my Door ,Nyle Cried in his pillow. -
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Anyon? Like it?Read it? Like it?
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Smooth Story.but Y so long Y,Y,Y?
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I can't even read parts of it, grammar is atrocious and spelling is a failure.
Plus it's way too short to even be considered a story.
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