heyy everyone
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Thread Topic: heyy everyone
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Whatevs dude.
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i made a new poems in social stdies today cuz i was bored.
The sky is dark
the world is dying
everythings crashing down
everyones drowning
in their own ocean of blood
everythings gone
nothing more to love
there is no hope
you try to run
but end up where you start
in the endless nightmre
but others perfer to call it
life
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yahhh... exactly my point. cool poem.
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somehow if feel like
im internaly dying
sufuring on the inside
but on the outside
look perfectly fine
somehow i feel like the world
is useless and have
no use in living
but you change that
you make me feel the
will to live
the will to move in
to not give up
but if one day
your gone it all comes to an end
and my whole worl will shatter and blow into
a million pieces. -
whoa... thats really good... like heart wrenching good... brilliant. ur poems are brilliant. hey my pic is my dog tucker. but i just call him Bud. lol... hes in such a great pose...
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oh and i wrote this one on my way from school.
your world is crashing
as my hands slowly
press hard against your throat
as if everyone of your breaths were liquid and they're slowly dripping
out of your body -
my friends say i should get them published..but dont kno how
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you should. and thats coming from somebody who you've never been face-to-face with before. u got talent. why not use it?
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i first started writing in 5th grade and havent written ever since its just now i got into it again looks like i still have it
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cool. thats what happened with me and basketball. i broke my leg in football so i couldnt play any sports for a couple years until my leg healed (it was a really bad break and i didnt listen and i played track anyway) but now im back and i seem better at it... idk why... its just when u take a break from something... u never lose your potential... weird right?
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yea
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i know... of all things wouldnt you lose it??
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idk some people never lose things
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true... if you have true potential it tends to stick with you for a long time...
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seems like me and you are the only people on besides the freakin timelimit... that freakin thing is on all the time... XD
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