My turn to make my very own thread.
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Thread Topic: My turn to make my very own thread.
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Actually I'm a potatooooooooooooooooooo
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Soooooooooooooooo
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Wanna hear a song I wrooooooooooote? -
Yessssssoooooooooo
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yaaaay~
This is a rough draft, so don't laugh at me. :I Lyrics and vocals, that is. Don't listen with earbuds. It was quiet, so I had to equalize it. Now it may or may not be painfully distorted.
I'm making you a promise-
you'll be dead before it gets too bad.
I don't do well playing savior.
I think I'm a monster in a mask.
But I'll give you my word
it won't hurt if you don't breathe.
Their hearts are aching for you
and your heart, it aches for me.
Am I holding you at gunpoint
even now, after all?
In your mind, it's yours and mine,
I own you right up to your thoughts.
I need it to be quiet.
I need all this noise to stop!
I need a little light inside to die
and a few bodies to drop.
There's a flower on your forehead.
It's blooming white and red.
I give it to you willingly
and hope you come back from the dead.
I'll see you in my dreams tonight
and maybe I'll apologize then.
I'll take your hand and walk you to
the light that's at the end.
I need the rain to fall now
and take the heat right from your skin.
I'm making you a promise-
you won't ever hurt like this again. -
How
Why -
What?
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That was awesome. How the hell do you sit down, write the thing, play a thing, and do the things together?
Talented people *rolls eyes* -
Nononono I don't play a thing. My Muni plays the thing. I wrote the words and sung it. I apologize for my misleading words. No, I'm not good. I can't play any instruments.
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Still that was beauty
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Thank you so much, Sissi. ;w; I need to redo the vocals, maybe tweak the lyrics a bit. I need to get better quality recording s--- and somehow be louder. I also think it'd be a million times better with some piano and some rain.
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Those could help. Maybe figure out a chorus thing?
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This particular song was a lazy bit. I thought it could just be a few verses and done. There's a certain style of writing that I really like that I'd been trying to use in it, and I think I may have scratched the surface of it, but I'm sure I'll destroy it entirely if I even try to add a chorus.
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Well you are the musician.
I need to go. Device is about to die.
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