I would sell my soul for a soul worth keeping.
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Thread Topic: I would sell my soul for a soul worth keeping.
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this is my most recent one so far
where'd you go?
where'd you go?
I can't see you
I've been naming every star in the sky
like children do
the room is warm but I'm freezing here
without you
where'd you go?
where'd you go?
can I come too?
I'm alone
and so scared
tell me it's cruel
to compare
others to you
like I don't know
but why did you have to go?
I want you back
not your memory
not your ash
I know it's wrong to treat others
like they lack what you had
but you were mine
and not too many can say that
I am sick of f---ing crying
every time I catch my breath
I am dying in my skin
I am starving in my head
I want this all to matter
bring you back from the dead
the way you left
wasn't pretty
wasn't subtle
wasn't kind
death is not poetic
and no song will change my mind
may whatever dying star
calls itself god fear the day
it has to answer to me
and just let it try to pray
everything for a reason
at least that's what people say
I don't care about the reason
fate's a b---- anyway
where'd you go? -
BRAVO!!!
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Oh wow that’s really good. How much time did you put into it?
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thank you both
I don't really know how much time I put into it, I know I thought I'd finished it but I didn't like it so I rewrote it from the ground up -
I wish gtq could just be more active than it used to be. Pretty much everyone is leaving.
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ROAD
THAT SONG
WHEN YOU FINISH IT
CAN I LIKE USE IT FOR A AMV OR PMV OR MAP THAT I WANNA DOOOOOOO
*probably won't happen because no one would be willing to put it on there yt channel for me-*
PLEASE
I wanna do like I think the song would go well with (it'll probably be pmv because can't do animation yet) like some scenes out of Rising Storm or River of Fire from Warriors :D -
I don't see why not
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Can i post a random song thought i had just now?
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sure
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Okay.
I never really thought i could taste this power
It's all i could ever dream of
But as time passed away
It all became clear
That i was alone
It was like sitting in the dark
The cold rain pounding on my skin
They thought i had it all
That i was at the top
It was fear
Respect
Did i really deserve it?
I lay there in the middle of the dark
being torn to pieces
I burnt all the edges
was left alone
Because i had it all
i had all of nothing
It was just a dream
that i could never wake up from
Left alone to power
I needed someone
My heart was broken
I tried to fit it with all i had but it only shattered to more bits and pieces
Then i looked up to your out stretched arm
(they thought i was a true lie)
You set me free, you broke the chains that were tied by me.
You were the light
(the lig-h-t)
The bright sun that shone to light my way
Forever and ever
You led me down that path, now i can live the life that i always wanted
With you-----
Pretty random things i thought. -
where did you take inspiration from for these lyrics?
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Those were just random thoughts.
my inspiration was the first sentence: i never thought i could taste this power. -
the lines individually are good, they just don't all seem to connect
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Yeah, like i should have fit in more words. I noticed that.
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home again
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