I would sell my soul for a soul worth keeping.
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Thread Topic: I would sell my soul for a soul worth keeping.
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Anything else up with you?
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Not much lol I’m boring
I still can’t figure out what to write for the next chapter of Rainbow Child ToT -
Do you want help?
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^^’ that would nice
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Do you have an outline?
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I have a loose outline where basically Hazel meets a guy that doesn’t have good intentions but she doesn’t know that and she starts dating him and gets on bad terms with Camryn
Eventually I have the scenes planned where she finds out they guy’s intentions and tosses him and Camryn & Hazel get together at the end but I don’t have anything else for the middle- that’s the problem -
So you're at the point where the guy just asked Hazel out, right?
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No I’m at the point where it’s a tiny bit after Hazel gets angry at Camryn for tapping her date with the Isaac(the guy) and they’re on bad terms
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oh s---, I'm behind then
where is it updated? -
Like, what chapter?
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No, what's the link again?
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Oh, here you go(imma have to go but I’ll be back soon I think)
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alright, I'm caught up
give me a little bit and I'll try to type up some suggestions -
Kk thanks
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Alright, here's what I've got.
1. Emily's intentions are less than noble- she likes Camryn herself, and she'll use the situation to get closer to her and try to turn her against Hazel.
2. A POV switch- show us the story from Isaac's perspective so the reader can really understand his intentions, and have a better reason to be against him.
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