-+= The Cinnamon Rolls Are Fresh From The Oven =+-
- Locked by mcqueen on May 4, '21 3:04pmReason: Owners request.
Thread Topic: -+= The Cinnamon Rolls Are Fresh From The Oven =+-
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I mean sure
As long as you avoid being or saying anything rude -
I've got no reason to be unkind to anyone right now
what's your story about? -
Ok :)
Basically, it's about where the main character(she's 16 years old) is lesbian and she came out to her family, and then she realizes that she has a crush on her best friend, who's a heterosexual female. Then her friend starts to date the school pervert, thinking that he was just a normal guy, and she won't listen to the main character when she tells her that the guy isn't good. Eventually, the friend figures it out and then finds out that she actually is bi and likes the main character
I have to have it end happy because ROMANCE
Yeah that's basically it. Its cheesy, but whatever lol -
nice! you're posting it on quotev?
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Yup :)
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Where can I find the link?
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:) Here it is -
am checking it out now
your writing looks good, right from the get go -
Aw thanks :>
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I'm not sure if you particularly want me to play editor, but I wanted to let you know that there's a typo in the first chapter.
"She bolted upright and gared at everyone on the bus." -
Damn it
Thanks, lemme fix it -
yes'm
would you like me to proofread, or should I stop? -
Idc really
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okay well
how is camryn's last name supposed to be spelled? -
OH
I just saw my MiStAke
Lemme fix eet
It's Hayle
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