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@scar cool.
@vamp :D lol funny smiley. -
your good at writing stories
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@murderdoll. :D that smiley makes me laugh all the time
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:D:D:Dit reminds me oflittle animes for some reason.lol
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lol. it sorta does. :D lol! XD
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part five: change
the girl finds out her brother was taken away fromt the assasins and tries to locate him. she meets her love again and they set out to try to rescue the brother. she still holds the locket when she sees a teddy bear which she takes with him. later on a spider creature tries to kill the girl and her love but they kill him when the teddy bear shoots a beam of light to kill him instead. the teddy bear was a trapped soul too and aid there was one more trapped soul and she needed to find the last one to free their curse. the girl gets a vison seeing a room with a chest. she manages to find the room and when she opens it she sees her dead brother.
i'll make part five in a sec -
D: i gtg bye vamp and scar.
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it was kool. lol you said part five. then said i'll make part five in a sec.
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aww, bye murderdoll D:
curse you for leaving >:( lol jk -
the girl is now secretive and different, filled with dark thoughts and try to kill the murdered of both from her dead uncle and brother. she abandons her love and tries to kill the murderers when she hears of a monster called the Curser. she goes to it with no fear and tries to ask where the murderes were. but then suddenly the teddy bear and locket get frantic and shoot the monster with a beam of light, causing the Curser to get in an outrage and curse the girl to stay with him forever. the girl and the two souls fight him and kill the Curser. and then they see a diary with a ruby on the front as a lock. the ruby was the third soul and the girl frees their curse and they become three children. they then hear of a wishing diamond and go to find it, but have no idea that the organization was tailing them.
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*nods head* they would make a good series.
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part seven: Elizabeth
the girl remember about the diary and reads it, it tells about her mother's life. she stores it safe and they head out to get the diamond wishing rock.
then the organization leave a random note saying they had her love and she had to give herself up to save him. she gives herself up and tells her love to find the wishing rock for her before she leaves.
the organization put experiements on her and she is sealed in the glass container.
it ends with a tear falling down her pale cheek. -
those stories are kool
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ok last one
part eight: Playback
the love finds the wishing rock with the three children, but fights a monster that was protecting it. he tries to rescue the girl but gets killed trying to. the three children flee, then come back and rescue the girl. they tell the girl of her love's fate, and then realize that the diamond was stolen by the organization leader. the girl comes and fights the organization, killing all the four leaders then getting the diamond. she and the three children look at it, then the girl wishes for everything to turn normal, and she wakes up with her family, then she finds her love and they live a life happily. the girl also finds her uncle with a wife and one child.
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its kool. there good.
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