HORSE'S OFFICIAL THREAD
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Thread Topic: HORSE'S OFFICIAL THREAD
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I can't use paragraphs, I'm s--- at it. I get ideas from whatever, I have a lot of book ideas. I should probably get better at writing before I start writing.
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It's better than anything I could do.
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Ah, I see. What colors did you use - like oil pastel or wax crayons or plastic crayons? I'm not good at art, so I don't know a thing. XP
Hmm, I see. The pic is compressed. You can upload it to some site and post the link here. We can get the details therefrom. -
Well to get better you need to start writing and critique your work as you get more experience so you can see your mistakes and fix them before they become a habit.
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I'm not good at that s---. I don't even have a website to upload it to. I also don't have the picture anymore. I took it at the time I had it. I have the painting to my grandfather that has brain cancer because of a song he sings. My family are singers, and I am too. I actually used acrylics believe if or not. I thought about pastels but I decided against.
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You're good. The flying border between the land and the see it amazingly set. It looks more releastic than the real earth itself. The sun is setting, giving a red glow to the sky. The lighthouse is shaded. It's good.
Brain cancer because of a song he sings?
Hmm, everyone has their opinion. -
Whenever I try critiquing my work myself I end up just saying everything is awful and I'm a failure, I should also pay attention to my Language Arts lessons.
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2kan, so you're a writer? *_*
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s--- sorry my things went togther Jeeshan. He has brain cancer and the painting was for a song he sings. It was hard to perfect that border. I bout cried I got so frustrated 😂. No one is a failure 2kan. Maybe you need someone else to critique it so they can help you.
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Well, I want to be one, one reason I soap so much is to practice my writing skills. I know, but I always end up thinking that I am. But where am I supposed to write? On paper? That's a terrible idea, my hand writing is awful. No one likes it when I sing, they say I'm tone deaf. Hmph.
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I understand that, but don't think that. I'm sure you are great in your own little qwerky ways. Write on paper as a rough draft. Not for anyone else but yourself then rewrite it on something else like a computer or get someone else to rewrite it as they critique it. Well I am pretty shy when it comes to singing in front of people I don't know. People tell me I have a good voice but to be honest, I don't really like singing in front of other people.
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I don't sing in front of anyone because my family says I'm tone deaf, which sucks because I like singing. I suppose, I still don't know where I'm supposed to go to write on a computer, ah well, I can ask my mom sometime. Now I just need to find time.
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Yeah, well it depends on what type of computer you use to find somewhere to write or you can just use wattpad.
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I have a Chromebook. No, no Wattpad! I plan on being an author as my job, or a side job, anyway, I might as well also get a profit from my ideas, Y'know. I want to be an author because why waste my creativity, make people happy, make people think, make people read, being remembered throughout history, and money.
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You could join Thought Catalogue.
Horse: Oh, I see.
The border seems perfect.
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