My new song 'Society'
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Thread Topic: My new song 'Society'
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YEAH, I'D GO THAT FAR BC IT'S MY SONG NOT YOURS!
K, thx for listening to that, bc I WILL find out anyone who tries to! That's how great I think this song is! :) Plz leave feedback after reading it. I provide the chorus in the first part, so when it says 'Chorus:' later on, the words will be up with the first one. Ok. After this thread's up I'll post the song. :) -
Slayerbrine Novice(mcrp?)
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READ ALL OF IT if you read it My fave part personally is the chorus :)
'Society' by beamiller1fan
Verse 1: Society thinks they own us
Every move we make
They're watching us
Threatening us
Telling us who we're supposed to be
Chorus:
But we own our dreams
Not gonna be like everyone else
Just because
It's our life
We'll fight our battles ourselves
Not gonna hand it over
Not gonna be held under lock and key
We'll do what we please
Not afraid to be brave
No cages
We'll be set free
Ready to be me
We're not society
Verse 2:
Society thinks they're better than us
Even though that isn't so
Every step we take
They try to change the direction
Telling us what path we're supposed to take
Chorus:
Verse 3:
Society thinks they control our minds
Our mindsets in tune with theirs
But I'm not a robot
One wrong thought, and it defines us
I don't wanna be just like them
Telling us what we're supposed to think
Chorus:
How was it? I think it could use a few major improvements and some minor tweaks, but I think it will end up being one of my best works after all of the editing. :) -
How are you even supposed to sing it?
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Slayerbrine NoviceAWESOME
WOOWOOOWOOOWOOOOWOOOWOOOWOOOOWOOOOWOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! -
"Even though that isn't so" you can't sing this part
And change "But I'm not a robot" to "But I'm no robot" -
@godofminecraft56
It won't rly have a set 'tune' yet until I make the final revisions to the lyrics
So, you can sing it however u'd like. I sing it in kind of an upbeat, emotional type of way, holding the last lyric of the line each time. -
Slayerbrine Novicehe is not god of minecraft notch is and I don't see a notch image
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@godofminecraft56 thx for thr suggestions
On that part, you could do,
'Society thinks they're better than us,
even thoughhhhh that isn't soooo' or something like that -
@Slayerbrine
Thx :) I'm glad u liked it
If more ppl like this one, I might post another later. :) -
@realminime u can see the song here :)
So can u @Rex , @ello , and @The_swag -
oh, and u too, @huntergirl521 :)
See my song in this thread, I mean. -
Slayerbrine Novice
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Well is the song sand high or low? Because I could potentially sing it.
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... Trying to keep meh thread up so all meh peeps can see it :)
*I'm nice
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