alex
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Thread Topic: alex
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here is a video of the song I wrote. The quality is bad and I think I stumbled right before the bridge, but for the most part, this is how it goes. -
well, try to get better then, or find another way, like saying thanks in a really cheerful way or something. :-/
then stay on it.
brb so I can watch it -
That might work, but when I do that I feel like I am steeling something from someone. I would rather give a crummy gift back then no gift at all.
Okay, I am, I have a line that I thought of when I first put together the piano part, I think I can use it for the next line.
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HoLY s--- THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL *dies*
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"Beauty failing like a storm dying at last,
Can't keep me from reality's mask,
'Cause I have loved you past millenium's bounds, killing all this sanity mask reality."
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You are bluffing .
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You are supposed to be the lyric genuine here, so can you help give each an idea for any part of it?
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Not really, its good
No, I'm not. Not at all.
In what way? Really, its your song, so... -
It still needs a little help.
Are you sure?
Yes I am sure, I have no idea what to do when the pitch drops. -
How so?
Yes, extremely sure.
Those need to be the most powerful words in the song, since that's usually when other instruments stop playing, or at least get quieter. -
gtg
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It doesn't fit. My second stanza doesn't flow.
Okay...
Yep, you see that is what I need help with. Words are easy but the timing of the words? That is a different story.
me too, I was supposed to be asleep like four hours ago. -
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bleh
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I think this might be a nice official chatting thread. It doesn't have to be but it could be
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