im bored!
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Thread Topic: im bored!
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im having trouble keeping a story interesting, and filling in space between major events.
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We could write a story together if you told me your idea, but I'm sure that I'm really boring you right now.
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not at all, it feels good to talk to someone else about an idea i havnt been able to put on paper.
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Really? Hmmm... that's good, so tell me about an idea for a story you have.
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well, the setting im figuring would be a city after a nuclear holocaust. ya know, buildings turned to shreds and red clouds filling the sky.
it would have to take place sometime in the future, because the main character would be like an android. before the war he was a daycare assistant. but when the bombs fell he ended up alone with all the kids at the daycare, and everyone else died.
the basic idea behind the whole story is supposed to be him raising these strange kids in a dead city, with them trying to get over the fact that he is a robot.
also, there were other survivors. the only difference is is that they werent as sheilded from the radiation and were all mutaeted. they are all in big, trench coats with masks, and keep on the outskirts of the city, and sorta over shadow the android and the kids.
it turns out that these other people were the parents of the kids. but the years of solitude and radiation has made them all mean and agressive. they try to take the children and the android has to protect them from the viciouse others even though they are their parents.
is that a thick enough plot? -
Hmmm... that's very good... shall we start now?
Let's first make it that it was in the past, and we give the reader a short summary of what life was like... but how many years in to the future do you wish to keep it? -
idk, i dont want it to be way out in the future, but somewhere far enough that there would believablu be androids. maybe 2210?
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Okay! Let's pretend it's 2010 in Chapter one, this robot android is in a day care, and suddenly the sky goes red... LOL.
But what's the android called? -
i had a few ideas for a name.
S.I.M.O.N
A.N.D.Y
J.O.H.N
anything like that. but i couldnt think of the abreviations. -
Hmmm...
Daycare
Assiting
Vicious
Inapropriate
Deportion -
David... meaning Daycare assistant helps with little sh1ts that act naughty! That work?
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D.A.V.I.D works!
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Ok! LOL I can't believe I thought that up quick!
So let's make it that he's in 2010 helping all the children do all this stuff...and then we make it that there's an explosion and the sky goes red... Is that good enough? Or did you have a different idea in mind? -
no that works.
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Ok! Shall we start?
Chapter one
2010, June 9th.
D.A.V.I.D (Daycare. Assisting. Vicious. Inapropriate. Deportion) was trying to make all the children in the day care be quiet, bobby was throwing yellow paint everywhere, so David ran to him and quickly took it off him.
"Please..stop..that.." cried David.
Then he ran over to Lily who was pulling the books off of the book case.
"Story! Story! Story!" she cried.
David picked up all the books but Lily would just throw them everywhere all over again.
Then Harry was throwing all the plasiticine in the bin, mixing up all the colors and thowing them at the walls to make it stick to them, David got very cross indeed.
"STOP!!" cried David, but the children took no notice.
There's the first part.
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