This is a song I wrote.

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Thread Topic: This is a song I wrote.

• EmoLove Newbie

  14 years ago
  I don't know if this is a good poem or not so tell me if it is...
  A poem of sadness
  
  When I left
  I thought I had murdered you
  When time passed
  I thought about it
  And realized I had murdered myself
  Then another one came along
  And I fell in love
  He murdered me and I was once again in sorrow
  Then it was you
  Again
  I have fallen for you
  But you have moved on and I was murdered once again
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  Hunteriscool Novice

  14 years ago
  http :// hunterisawesome . deviantart . com
  
  
  Poems on my page
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  Hunteriscool Novice

  14 years ago
  people ignore me because im stupid and my pic horrfies them
• EmoLove Newbie

  14 years ago
  Hey Hunter! Did you like my poem and I will visit your site.
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  Hunteriscool Novice

  14 years ago
  it was good :)
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  Tara Love Novice

  14 years ago
  I liked your poem emo. I'll get on your site hunter :)
• EmoLove Newbie

  14 years ago
  Thanks. I am reading yours right niw
• EmoLove Newbie

  14 years ago
  Wait, wrong one. Your website isn't working
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  Hunteriscool Novice

  14 years ago
  deviantart . com
• EmoLove Newbie

  14 years ago
  Okay. Let me try again.
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  Tara Love Novice

  14 years ago
  I liked your poem hunter :D
• EmoLove Newbie

  14 years ago
  What do I click on?
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  Hunteriscool Novice

  14 years ago
  Thanks tara, i tend to write dark poetry
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  Hunteriscool Novice

  14 years ago
  Radiohead-Creep
  
  Theme Song of my life
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  I like music Senior

  14 years ago
  ~Despondent Soul~
  
  Through all the agony in my soul,
  That lay buried away from the light,
  A part of me still revere's,
  All those tears I'd shed in the night,
  
  I disclaimed anything near the truth,
  Anger and fear filling my heart,
  I wish I could go back to those days,
  And change what tore me apart,
  
  In my blurry guilty thoughts,
  I know that I can be conciet,
  If only I were patient on that day,
  The one where we would meet,
  
  I know now what I must do,
  If I don't want to sin anymore,
  I'll clean all that's inside of me,
  And put roses by Heaven's door,
  
  Pray for me because I have found,
  The way to be aplomb once more,
  To be so happy and all care-free,
  And kill the sad cavity in my core,
  
  My sadness is so eneffable,
  I need a kind essence once more,
  To throw away the ghouls,
  Like a godsend from before,
  
  The wind is so splenetic,
  And it rushes so very fast,
  I only have the present moment,
  I must treat it as my last.

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