BRANDI. I'm back ;)
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Thread Topic: BRANDI. I'm back ;)
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alright....lemme type the plot...
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Alright. I just came up with this while i was in cali. I just want you to read it and see if it's good.
Alright, this is about...a few years ahead. Jill is...22. So, jill is divorced from carter. His anger issues staring acting up again, he was drinking, and he was being abuse, etc. She lives in her old house. Jill has custody over their almost 3 year old son, tyler. Carter swore that if he ever saw jill again, he would kill her. One day, jill goes out to a bar with marissa. Drunk carter and a few of his friends are there too. So, carter sees jill, but he didn't know she was JILL. So he takes her home with him against her will, etc. And the next morning, jill wakaes up in carters bed with him. He wakes up, but he still doesn't remember who she is. It will take him a while to remember, but when he does....he goes out on the hunt to kill jill and tyler. But, does he actually still...love her? Does jill still love carter? When he finally tries to kill her and she wakes up in the hospital....what will happen next?
Your thoughts? -
*abusive, etc.
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BUMP.
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eh....sure. how old?
I'll make the son charry:
Name: Tyler Terrino
Age: 3
Looks: Medium length brown hair and carters eyes.
Personality: Gets scared easily,n typical little kid.
Others: Has occasional nightmares about "daddy". -
THEY DIVORCED. And jill got her last name back xD so....then jill has to be 25. alright.
The 2 girls sat at the bar, sipping their drinks. "So....where are you gonna move to?" jill asked, ignoring the loud group of guys in the corner of the bar. -
"Maybe mass...." marissa replied. Jill eyes went to the group of boys, then she took a double take. Carter. Drunk carter. "Dammit..." she muttered, grabbing marissa's wrist. "We need to go. now." she said in a low voice, getting up.
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"Wait, why?" marissa asked, putting down her drink. "Behind you, idiot." jill whispered, dragging marissa to the door.
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(k)
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(EATING A POTATO.)
"Oh s---." marissa mumbled. Carter was standing right infront of the 2 girls. jill quickly turned around. -
"Hey let go!" jill said. Marissa facepalmed. It would be best to act like another person...
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"It's fine," she said, taking his hand, getting up. "But, i really need to go now...." In her mind, jill was freaking out. She needed to act like a different person...
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(One of my O.C. s...)
He blocked the door, sighing. "Hey, look. Let me buy you a drink. Please. I feel bad about bumping into you like that." -
"No, i'm fine, really. I uh, have a son at home, and i need to get back to him." she said calmly. frick frick frick.....you idiot carter...
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