Deserted Island Soap Opera
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Thread Topic: Deserted Island Soap Opera
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I feel so ashamed. I had to bring it back to say sorry.
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It's okay, you don't have to feel ashamed
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Thanks for forgiving me Hat
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No prob, you wanna continue this?
Or, do you wanna start from the top and have the soap go in a whole new direction?
Or do you want it to just die? -
I really don't know, what do you think?
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I'd find it cool if we could start from the top, but have everyone in the ship wreck die except for my character and her brother. But, her brother isn't found until later on, so my character thinks he's dead.
That okay? -
Yep, okay.
I was sitting on the rock by the shore, warm waves gently splashing at me bare feet. In the distance, I saw a very large canoe, going down. I gathered some of the other villagers and we went towards it, trying to make it in time to help. -
I was drowning. The water swirling around me, making it impossible to swim. I would die, everyone I know and love would die. I closed my eyes, just as my mind went blank.
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When we got there, I saw a young lady drowning. She had a very poofy dress. She seemed to not know how to swim. I dove into the water, and grabbed her by the wrist and brought her back to the surface. I saw the dead body of a man about the age of my father.
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I coughed up water, and looked around. My vision was still a bit blurry, and I was breathing hard. Once my vision cleared I was shown a shocking sight. My father, dead.
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The girl was waking up. I couldn't help the man, he was dead. I grabbed the paddles to the canoe and drove it back to shore of our village.
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I slowly stood up and walked over. I knelt beside him, and parted his shaggy hair from his face. His eyes stared sightless, and in his hand he clutched a rose. The same rose mother gave him before she died.
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Once the canoes hit shore, I carried the girl to the medicine tent. Cloud Dancing, our medicine man, inspected her and said that she was fine, and all she needed was rest. I thanked him and placed a small bowl of water beside the foreign girl, so she could have a drink when she needed it.
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I smiled at the girl, and rubbed my head. Once she had gone, I let the tears flow. My father lay dead on the beach, my brother was most likely on the ocean floor, and all the other crew members had joined him. I was alone, with strangers who could be cannibals for all I know.
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She was slowly waking up. I gave her a piece of Cyperus leaf fabric to wipe her tears with.
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