A song I wrote
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Thread Topic: A song I wrote
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Sorry if it's...bleh.
and it's kinda short.
Revived
Months ago,
I lost my best friend.
Weeks ago,
I cried over it.
Days ago,
I felt like everyone abandoned me.
Hours ago,
I was dreading what today brought.
Minutes ago,
I realized.
You mean nothing to me.
You mean nothing to me.
Nothing at all.
I'm still young,
my life will go on.
And one day,
karma's going to fuck you up.
Just wait
because, friend, I promise.
I'll be there,
to witness the whole thing.
I realized,
You mean nothing to me
You mean nothing to me,
nothing at all.
You killed me inside.
But now,
I'm alive!
I'm alive!
I've been revived!
I realized,
You mean nothing to me
You mean nothing to me,
nothing at all.
I realized,
You mean nothing to me
You mean nothing to me,
nothing at all.
I realized,
You mean nothing to me
You mean nothing to me,
nothing at all.
Damn, why does every song I write about betrayal of a friend sound like a break up song? x3 well, I guess they're kinda similar...anyway, yeah...THAT'S THE SONG. x3 -
I like it. :)
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Here's another. I was to lazy to type it so put up with my singing. x3 -
SilverMoon8 Novicecool! just add a catchy tune and it will be perfect
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I honestly don't believe a 'catchy tune' would work for this song. It's supposed to have a dark beat, The Fallen is, at least. (the one I sang)
As for Revived, I don't have a beat in mind...yet. -
Sorry, but your friend ditching you isn't a dark subject.
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shinedownlover Novicei liked it :)
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shinedownlover Novicehey would you be mad at me if i took the first song that you put and changed it some and made it about a break up song? i made it alot different
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