A Guys Song Book

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Thread Topic: A Guys Song Book

• Jake101 Newbie

  12 years ago
  Okay so, I'm a guy and I like to make songs. I'm 13 and I'm not afraid to post my music. Hope you guys enjoy it. Please comment :)
• Jake101 Newbie

  12 years ago
  I'm Sorry
  
  I look out of my window tryin to see you
  You duck,tryin to get out of my view
  Oh.
  Yeah.
  You turn on your radio
  hear my voice blastin on the stereo
  Baby.Ive missed you for long while
  And I just need to say I'm sorry tonight.
  oh.
  I just need to say I'm sorry.
  Tonight.
  Ohhhh.
  Oh oh oh oh.
  Yea.
  I just wanna say that I'm sorry that I brought you down
  Your dreams were gone,in a single blow.
  I just wanna say that I'm sorry I broke up with you
  cause baby I miss you
  Yes,I do.
  Oh baby I miss you.
• Jake101 Newbie

  12 years ago
  Look @ Me
  
  I try to get you back
  Try to
  Get you on my side
  I try to
  Forget the night
  You walked right outta the room
  Try to make you stay
  But you cant even look @ me.
  you wont even look @ me...
  baby, I don't care if you run away,
  I wont make you stay ohh
  If youll just look at me
  Just a single glance I don't really care
  just baby look at me
  And maybe you will see
  Baby ive changed
  Rearranged
  Just look @ me
  Baby.
  Just look @ me.
• 

  OZZYIOMMI Senior

  12 years ago
  A bit short there, eh?
• tori109 Novice

  12 years ago
  Ok I'ma girl, but that is AMAZING! I think it would be better if I knew the like tune and the notes in the song, but its OUTSTANDING i write song ans they aren't even close to how good that is....
• tori109 Novice

  12 years ago
  well you have to add music, look at some songs and only the lyrics, they are short. There is a break in the song where music plays, but it wouldn't hurt to add more, but if you like it the way it is that's fine. But I LOVE it
• Jake101 Newbie

  12 years ago
  Thx for the comments :)
• tori109 Novice

  12 years ago
  ikr!
• Jake101 Newbie

  12 years ago
  Lol @ bluemoon and tori109
  U took my quiz? Now I'm happy
• tori109 Novice

  12 years ago
  Aww thanks jake101
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  CodySimpsonLuv Experienced

  12 years ago
  Those are great song you could be a fantastic song writer.
• tori109 Novice

  12 years ago
  You should persue the songwriting buisness if you like, you could make it!
• tori109 Novice

  12 years ago
  I took your quiz got an 80%
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  Jake101 Novice

  12 years ago
  Thanks @ codysimpsonluv and tori109
• tori109 Novice

  12 years ago
  Your welcome ;-)

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