Finally! my new song! screw the others!this is it!!!! Hero!!
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Thread Topic: Finally! my new song! screw the others!this is it!!!! Hero!!
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(chorus)
Everyday another child is dieing...
Everyday another promise broken...
A motherless's heart is breaking...
A man's heart is no longer beating...
Someone tell me why please...
Is there some way for me to make a change...
is there something out there for me to rearrange...
my heart is breaking...
to see the hurting...
Little did I know
I can be the hero...
But I cant do it on my own...
I cant do it solo..
Everyday another child is dieing...
Everyday another promise broken...
A motherless's heart is breaking...
A man's heart is no longer beating...
Someone tell me why please...
They say that no news is good news...
People think that its all good...
People always singing the blues...
Some children are taken
before they awaken
My life is hurting so...
Im so full of sorrow
I cant seem to let is go..
Can we be their hero?
Everyday another child is dieing...
Everyday another promise broken...
A motherless's heart is breaking...
A man's heart is no longer beating...
Someone tell me why please...x2
(Can we be their hero
Will you be their hero)
Everyday another child is dieing...
Everyday another promise broken...
A motherless's heart is breaking...
A man's heart is no longer beating...
Someone tell me why please...
....Hero...
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand we're done... -
Coolio!
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thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks!
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It's tad repititious, and the wordings you chose are strange in place "They say that no news is good news People think that its all good" and in some places it ryhmes when in others it doesn't. Overall, it could use some editing.
Other than that, good job. It has meaning. -
thanks...
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That's good wait not good it's Grrrrrreat
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thanks ale
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That was awesome!
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thats sara!
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@kierra wtf?! i ment thanks sara and izzy -_-
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