Puppets contest
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Thread Topic: Puppets contest
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I am aware there are lots of these but mines a bit different
There will be one judge ( not me cuase im entering ) who will decide who gets in teh first round then next time it will be a poll for people to vote
The twist is other than the theme it has to focus around a plot like a hero who has lost everything and you must include that at the bottom
Theme : there isn't one this round as its teh qualifications
Plot : a girl who drains the power and life force of anyone she makes contact with has just touched her mum who she was just reunited with when her mum was pushed of a building
I've got so much foris to do together
But now we have so little time
I had so many questions for you
You only had a few answers
And now it's over
And it's my fault
It's over now
And you're gone
It's my fault for being this way
I can't hope
It's all my fault im a freak
And now it's you who pays the price
They say having a child like me is like finding a single sand grain in a patch of grass
But why did have to you
Why did you have to die
And now I'm alone again
Another dead person to add to my list
Tears ( the screen fades to black and then the mums funeral after everyone has left she is seen placing flowers on her mothers grave crying and it ends looking at the cloudy sky ) -
Can I be the judge?
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Hmm fill out the form in my other thread in the lounge and maybe
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Wiat im writting a new one
Plot : a girl who sees things differently in a better light has been accused of being a witch and she survived the drowning she is about to be burned at the stake these are her last words
Even though I cry
It's a shame i cnat lie
No one will miss me
No one will cry for my death
Though it's not their fault
A witch they have claimed
It's just the way I see things
Chorus
Through the looking glass alice passed
Down the rabbit hole alice fell
Wonders
Wonders
Did she see
V2
As teh flames begin to rise I hear the roaring chants mixing with the blazing flames
Fueld by their wronged hate
I could never claim that I had friends but I could have my wonderland
In my own dreams
A witch is not who i am
I see the world diffrently
Than they see I see it better
I see happiness I see beauty but they won't know
Chorus
Through the looking glass alice passed
Down the rabbit hole alice fell
Wonders wonders
Did she see
V3
Hope is a funny thing
Fate is an unfair deal
Life is balanced equally by the bliss of death
Murder is just a sin another to their list
But burning a person who was free of sin
Is unforgivable even though I do forgive them
I know somewhere they're doomed
The rainbow it fades with me as the fire grows my heart once strong and proud pained the world will know
My hopefull song carried to you
May faith be provided
Wonders like I've seen one does not simply make up
The heart and soul and mind blanced equaly give me freedom
( that's my entry ) -
Join pleas e
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I can't tell the truth to you,
Its just to hard to explain.
One moment im with you
The next im stuck here in the grave
And... i ... cant tell what's happening
The pains to real to take
Its all a blur of lights
And i cant see your fa-ace
To every word,
I force my mouth to speak
No truth comes out
Hope your not listening
I think of the days
we'd sit around and think
Hope your not listening
I know you better than that
And... i ... cant tell what's happening
The pains to real to take
Its all a blur of lights
And i cant see your fa-ace
I think about you
Everyday im in this war
Cant stay up for long
No no not for long
And... i ... cant tell what's happening
The pains to real to take
Its all a blur of lights
And i cant see your fa-ace
And... i ... cant tell what's happening
The pains to real to take
Someone just tell me if its not to late
To erase the lies i made
Oh oh ooooh oh
Just tell me
Ooh
TELL ME
AAAAAAH
te--ell me
If it's not to late -
Cool song what's the plot
The judges are
Ali30
Cody
Amd dark -
Kettering:
I wish that I had known in
That first minute we met
The unpayable debt
That I owed you
'Cause you'd been abused
By the bone that refused
You and you hired me
To make up for that
And walking in that room
When you had tubes in your arms
Those singing morphine alarms
Out of tune
They had you sleeping and eating and
And I didn't believe them
When they called you a hurricane thunderclap
When I was checking vitals
I suggested a smile
You didn't talk for a while
You were freezing
You said you hated my tone
It made you feel so alone
So you told me I had to be leaving
But something kept me standing
By that hospital bed
I should have quit but instead
I took care of you
You made me sleep and uneven
And I didn't believe them
When they told me that there
Was no saving you -
A girl with a dark secret makes a friend and tries to hind it but when it becomes to much and secret spills out every turns on her. She is forced to fight her evil secret and the lies she replaced it with
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I don't like ihlaoy's song.
(Haha just kidding,its pretty good!) -
Tehya re both really good
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