Why do I even try?

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Thread Topic: Why do I even try?

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  TheOnlyOne Novice

  11 years ago
  [first]
  I feel a red hand
  Brush against my cheek.
  It's so very misleading,
  The way it smiles.
  
  I feel it hold me warmly
  Right before it touches another.
  I see it, this murderous hand.
  I am always the bridesmaid.
  
  
  [chorus]
  Sick of being second,
  I want a real and genuine kiss.
  I want something better than a wink,
  I want to really feel what love is.
  
  I've been through this sh-t before.
  I just want to love somebody
  I want to know they would die for me. Only me.
  I want to really feel what love is.
  
  [second]
  I feel your breath,
  Right against my neck.
  You smile but I see
  All the trickery in it.
  
  I feel you cut me slowly.
  Then you vanish only to return
  With lipstick on your ear, not mine.
  What kind of phantom am I loving?
  
  
  [chorus]
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  dannylover321 Experienced

  11 years ago
  I like it.
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  Reason Novice

  11 years ago
  Wow, this song...it's so....
  STUPID. ._.
• Alleria Novice

  11 years ago
  I love it! :D great job!
• JustAPerson Novice

  11 years ago
  I may like it depending on how the voice sounds. Would it be some one like Amy Winehouse (Yes, I know she's dead) or Carly Rae Jepsen? The voice is what matters the most. As long as the lyrics are well put and not "Explit" it's all the voice. This is my opinion and sometimes the lyrics do matter for specific genres.

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