Young and Carefree

Thread Topic: Young and Carefree

Hatshepsut237 Newbie

14 years ago

My life is packed with times to wait,
Sometimes I don't appreciate.
Has one occassion been your fate?
Hear, hear, let me elucidate.

I stand in line, I sit in chairs.
I wait in singles, sometimes in pairs.
My waits may circle or even square,
These shapes can queue most anywhere.

I wait for ordered food to go,
Or tickets for a picture show.
To pay some money that I owe,
Or just to get some good info.

I make a call, I hold the phone,
While hearing directions yet unknown.
More buttons to push that always postpone,
Speaking to someone in another time zone.

My parents say I must defer,
Doing adult things I much prefer
To do right now. But I concur,
Not certain to how long they do refer.

So impatient as I seem to be,
Sometimes to waiting I must agree.
Acquiescence isn't a guarantee,
But for now, I'm Young and I'll Be Carefree.
I like music Novice

14 years ago

Wow, that was really good! Great work, it's lovely. =)
Hatshepsut237 Newbie

14 years ago

Thanks
girlio Newbie

14 years ago

That was not great,it was spectacular!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hatshepsut237 Newbie

14 years ago

Thank you girlio

It wasn't good enough to win the poetry contest though. Oh well, Hell did a good job
Ellis Redding Novice

14 years ago

Not bad Hat, you make poems very often?
Hatshepsut237 Experienced

14 years ago

Just when I'm bored and have nothing to do

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