The path of the fallen.
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Thread Topic: The path of the fallen.
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Roniboi NewbieThe reaper of death,
the angel of life.
They walk together,
in day in night.
Together they must follow the path,
that might lead to aftermath.
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(ehh? good begining poem?) -
Roniboi NewbieOnce opon a time there was a girl. A girl who didnt have the nicest clothes. Who had the pale skin and black hair. Whos eyes were the brightest emerald. That girl is me. Ella Gui. And I am the only witness to my bestfriends and boyfriends death. There is only one problem. I died too.
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Roniboi NewbieThey found my 'body' in the ashes of... nothing. Just ashes. The bodies were untouched. They took our- us to the morgue where after one day at exactly midnight the bodies disapeared. I dont know what happened... I woke up- I think in the middle of a huge feild, barefoot and partialy naked. I think it was dark, for there was nothing but shadows surrounding me. I tried to stand, but I was so weak... just so... Suddenly a long tendril flicked out and wound around my ankle leaving a searing pain in its wake.
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Roniboi NewbieI'll be back... :p comments?
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Um... it's not that I don't like it, but I don't really get it. Could you perhaps explain a bit more? Or add some more detail to your writing?
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