Could I have an opinion on a paper? .3.
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Thread Topic: Could I have an opinion on a paper? .3.
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Kitty_Cat NewbieStaring out my Sting Rays window at the dry grass as my old man drove me outta town. I didnt know where, but I sure as heck knew why. He and Mom were talking about what a disgrace I was, I knew it. Talkin with their eyes they were. Fiddling with a lock of my hair I thought miserably, this is gonna be the last time Im in this car Ill never be in my own car again! Then again, it cant always be perfect. Things are rough all over, aint that right, Cherry?
I sighed and caught my folks staring at me from the corner of my eye. There are worse things that couldve happened you know! I snapped, narrowing my eyes.
Pop turned his eyes back on the road, but Mom kept her glare. Sherrie, sweetie oh gosh, she hasnt used that in forever. Maybe shes finally telling me where Im headed to Nah, probably just scolding me more, you know how it is. You know we love you, but this is just unacceptable!
I shook my head and drowned her out, going over what had happened. I barely knew myself, bu- wait, thats a lie. I do know what happened. I dont regret it, but that doesnt mean that I wanted this to happen. Placing my hand firmly on my stomach, I continued to gaze out the window. The sun was beginning to set and I wondered if Ponyboy was doing the same over at his place. Now dont be thinkin bout Ponyboy, you wont be seeing him ever again. Dally either for that matter. My breath caught in my throat. I was still havin a little bit of a hard time thinking about Dally without getting all teary. Now I was going to give birth to his child Yet again I shook my head, as if that would make the cold truth disappear. I wonder if itll be a redhead like me or if itll be blonde like him I smiled. The baby didnt have to tear me apart on the inside; it could be what makes leavin worth it. My smile turned into a grin, my baby was made with someone I loved. Love, just cause hes dead dont mean I cant still love him.
Sure it was gonna be a rough time, wherever it is Im, going, but I could pull through. I know I can. Content in thoughts of my future I dozed off.
I dreamed about the baby. Whether it would be a boy or girl, if it would be more like me or him, what theyd like I mustve been more tired than I thought. Mom was shaking me awake while the sun was shinin slightly right into my eyes.
Get up, child! she said irritated. She mustve been trying to rouse me for awhile.
Im up, I muttered, shielding the sun from my face. I was guessing it was around nine in the morning by the sun and we were at a gas station. What times it? I asked through my yawn.
Its almost ten, hon. Also were almost there. she added, looking out the window. Where is your father?! she shrieked impatiently.
Rolling my eyes I tried to survey my surroundings, but all I saw was gas station. Mom, cant you just tell me where Im going? I tried one last time.
Glancing out the window once more then meeting my gaze, she reluctantly answered, Florida. -
Kitty_Cat NewbieMy quotations didn't show up! :O
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That's going well.
You're a good writer :3 -
Kitty_Cat NewbieThank you! :3 My teacher said that as well.
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DO IT FOR JOHNNY, MAN! LET'S DO IT FOR JOHNNY!
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Anyways, pretty good. :3 you should make a story here.
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Kitty_Cat NewbieHmmmm? Johnny isn't in this and he's dead..... And thank you, but I don't think I would. ^^"
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