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Hey everyone, _Followed_ here
Was wondering if I should post my story here. It's called R.O.W (Renegades Of War)
Here's a small preview;
When Icis' eyes opened, she was laying in a tangled shrub, the branches and leaves surrounding her thickly. She cough suddenly, the smell of smoke hitting her nostrils. 'A..Ajax,' she said, searching for him. She gazed around before coughing again and summoning some strength to haul herself to her feet. A groan hit her ears and she ducked out from the bushes. There lay Ajax's gasping body at her feet. 'Ajax!' she cried. She slid down the hill beside him, crouching down. He was alive. The wood shard had sucken a few inches into Ajax's chest. Luckily it looked as if it hadn't touched the lungs, but was dangerously close and on the oppisite side from his heart. Blood dripped from the wood and into the dirt, staining it a brownish red color. 'Ajax..!' she said. She gently rested her hands on his shoulders. He groaned and coughed, a bit of blood spattering her cheek. 'Come on, get up soldier!' she yelled. 'Icis ...I....' he muttered. She grabbed his hand without thought, her blue eyes that had once been cold and serious now soft and shimmering. 'Ajax...' she said more quietly. 'Ajax... i'm alright. You'll be fine. Ryuu will be here with the others soon and they'll help you! Don't worry, we'll save you.' Her heart pounded in her ears. She had never had anyone save her like that. He had used his body to sheild her from the shard. Who knows how hard he had hit the ground when he was blown back. A scrape on her shoulder burned intencly. She clenched her teeth and reached up with her left hand, pressing the button to speak to Ryuu. 'Ryuu, come in,' she said quietly. 'Rodger,' came the answer. 'You sound... shaken. What's up? Did something happen?' Icis tightened her grip a bit on Ajax's hand. 'The rookie is injured. He was skewered by a shard of wood from an explosion. Any known cause for the dynomite?' 'Nope, negative. I'll be right over. Oh and Icis?' Icis blinked, looking out over to where ashes began to settle at the old farm house that had been obliterated. 'Yes?' she asked. 'Stay strong... this is unusual for you. You don't... sound like yourself. We'll be over as soon as we can.' Icis nodded, releif merely drippng through her though her legs still felt like they were about to give out. 'Rodger,' she finally said. Icis let her left hand fall down upon Ajax's stomach. She closed her eyes, her expression troubled and worried. As she opened them back up she could hear faint yelles from other side of the forest. 'They're coming Rookie,' she whispered. 'I promise you'll live. I swear on my life.' The rushing of running feet and then snapping of branches on the forest floor made her jerk up. She knew it would be the other Renegades but she couldn't be exactly sure. She reached for the handle of a long, silver pointed machete that was strapped to her back tightly. Acis exploded from the bushes. 'Over here!' he yelled. Ryuu and Kaida came running in with a stretcher, quickly lifting Ajax up and into the sling. As they stood up, Icis was left on her knees, her fingers breaking away from his. Acis kneeled down next to her and rested his hand upon her shoulder. She looked at him with solemn eyes and stood up. Acis quickly jumped to his feet and followed her, helping her every step of the way back to camp. -
Need to know if you guys want me to post a chapter each day :)
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