I wrote a short story but I don't know how to end it
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Thread Topic: I wrote a short story but I don't know how to end it
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I don't feel like typing it all,so here's a summary:
A girl wakes up to see it's snowing in the small village she lives in. She goes outside to play in the snow with her younger brother. It snows in the village for the next 4 days. On the 5th day,there's an avalanche. All of the village survives the avalanche. After all of the snow and ice melts,some people move out of the village because the avalanche made them paranoid.
...How should I end it?? -
Please respond soon >_
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Maybe she could be the only one left because everyone else moved out? And she has to survive on her own? Maybe your closing sentence could be something like "And now I'm left alone here to survive.... on my own." ?
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Or the village was silent, all exept for the suspicious little girl giggles that lead lone travelers to travel back in time and die in the avalanche. Then end with a news paper article stating suspicious bodies were found years later!
... :p Sorry. Too lenghthy?
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