For Hephy.
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Thread Topic: For Hephy.
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I'm making a story...That's based on.....wait for it...FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST. BAM.
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I SHALL POST THE FIRST CHAPTER.....wait for it.....TOMORROW.
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Coolz.:3
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It's going to take a while to type. >.> I WILL get it done, though. I've been thinking about it all f---ing day.
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Three friends were walking home from the girl's school. They had to cross a bride that went across the highway as a shortcut; The Girl had to get home quickly, for her dad was dying. Her friends walked on either side of her. A tall, long black haired adult was striding on her right, her expression hard to read. She had her arms crossed as she walked next to the girl. If you looked closly, you could see a tattoo on her arm that was covered by the shirt's sleeve. On her left, a teen with short brown hair was running next to her. His shirt was moving around in the wind as he laughed.
>.> One part or chapter one. -
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The girl had long red hair, and her red eyes sparkled in the sunlight. Her arms were crossed as well, but not in the way the adult had hers. Her shirt was black, and her jeans were a dark purple.
The small group began to walk up the bridge when the girl suddenly tensed, stopping her walking. The boy, not paying attention, ran all of the way to the other side. The adult stopped, looking at the girl.
"What is it?" she asked, her black hair whipping in the wind. The girl's eyes narrowed.
"He's her-." were the only words she said before adoing line of red energy began tearing up the bridge. The girl snorted, clapping her hands and thrusting them to the floor. A burst of blue energy began fixing the bridge, and the two powers collided.The man controlling the red energy was thrust into the air; he landed Ina car. The girl pushed the adult towards the little boy.
"Take Elliot away from here, Death. Now." the girl said. Death dissapeared, only to reappear next to Elliot. -
* no . When the girl is talking. >.>
Damn. That took for ever. >.> Still not done. xP -
*in a
Death looked at the girl, her eyes filled with worry.
"What about you?" she asked in a cold tone. The girl shrugged.
"I guess I'll be fine..." she muttered, looking at the bridge. It was falling apart The girl took one look at Death.
"Bye." she said, running and jumping into the hole that the bridge had created. Elliot screamed, running towards the chasm, but Death kicked him back.
"DARK!!!" the boy yelled, trying to get up. Death looked down.
"There is nothing we can do..." she muttered. A raging river had always been under the bridge, and many splashes could be heard. All was silent after that. -
Dark's Point of View
I felt the air rushing past me as I fell towards the river. I had no clue what the hell I was doing, but I did know one thing; This was water. And I know someone who loves it.
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Dark's point of view
I felt arms latch around me as someone caught me before I fell into the rushing water. Sloth. She dragged me through the water for a moment before flinging me onto the shore, where I landed next to Envy. He scowled, bending down.
"You again." he said, lightly kicking me.
"Me again." I said, shrugging. Sloth pulled out of the water, reforming. She shook out her hair.
"You have to stop saving people." Envy said, walking past me. I edged away, giving the two room to glare at each other. -
I like it so far.w.
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(I'm finding it quite stupid, actually. xD
First person sucks. :I)
Envy and Sloth began to argue with each other, getting louder and louder by the second. Dark just sat there, trying not to laugh.
"THIS TWIT DESERVED TO DIE!!" Envy yelled, loud enough for Dark to hear.
"You can't let everyone just go and die!" Sloth shouted back, not as loud as Envy.
"I CAN. SHE'S A HUMAN. WHY NOT JUST LET HER DIE?"
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"You've pointed that out already. Give me one goof reason why she doesn't deserve to die."
Sloth was about to open her mouth to reply, but ended up shutting it. Envy still had a scowl on his face.
"No reply, huh? Just like I thought." he turned to look at Dark, his eyes narrowed. -
*good
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Dark stood up. "So, are you two just going to stand there b----ing around, or are we going to do something?" She put her hands on her hips, blinking. Envy growled. "There is no we. You're going to leave, and that's final." Sloth shook her head, beginning o leave the scene, when Envy turned to her. "Go do something while I take care of this....human." Sloth nodded, taking off.
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