The Watcher
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eilloh NewbiePrologue:
"My name is Sky,Spirit and I am a spirit seer.I can see and speak to the dead.Well,the half dead.More on that later.
Now I must visit Miss Samantha,Arnold.It is going to be a long flight to Tennesee." -
eilloh NewbieChapter 1:
The stately mansion was perfect for spirits.I knew Miss Samantha was on The victorian estate somewhere."Probally in one of the bathrooms,"I thought.Samantha had a liking to bathrooms.
Me,myself and I walked into the hall.Not my freinds or those ridiculous "experts" on tv who use vaccums to catch a ghost.Nope,just me and my wits.
I heard tiny footsteps at the end of the hall.Cautiously I sat on the floor and waited."Samantha,"I called,trying to show her I was a freind.The little girl peered over at me and smiled.She knew I could see her.Timidly she said,"How can you see me?"
"I am a spirit seer,Samantha."I said walking towards her."I have this gift to help limbos find their way out."
She ran up to me and hugged me,tears streaming from her eyes.
"Thank you."she said.
"Samantha you must tell me what you have yet to do."
"Well,when I was alive I never gave back Christopher's ring."
"What did you do with it?"
I,I hid it in my pocket the morning I died.But I lost it in the Tennesee river."
"Then it is your duty,Samantha,to retreive it.Is your brother still alive?"
"Yes now he lives in New York."
Samantha,you died in 1989,Correct?"
"Yes,I don't know where the ring is though."
"Hmm,I think I know who to call to help you with that."I actually smiled. -
Wow, that's great! It's very rarely that I see a story written in 1st person. =)
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Whoa,that was great,I'd love it see more :)
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