I made a poem
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Thread Topic: I made a poem
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Wasn't it enough? To hurt me that bad?! You didn't care then, I don't think you care now.You didn't care when the trigger snapped and my life ended. Now you cry and say you want me back? When I most need you, you back was facing me. I was drowning in my own tears. I met a world of darkness. Even then when I was alive, I was dead in your eyes. I was another prisoner of depression, Like so many other people. I always thought, "Maybe if I was perfect, you'd love me" Guess now we wont know. I hear you cry at night. Scream and apoligize to mid air.. The life I had was a complete nightmare. Living Hell. But even through all of that I Forive you. I'll leave and rest, and you can continue with your life, without me.
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Feedback?
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The beginning is kind of sketchy but it got better.
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Sam23 NewbieI liked it. It was very good.
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Nice.
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Thanks guys :)
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Great Job Home!
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