so i'm writing a story..
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Thread Topic: so i'm writing a story..
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simon hock and the dark chalenges.and the story is about a guy (called simon)with his little sister and best friend.they don't have any parents and they live in a tree house.simon and his friend go and still food and the stuff they need.but his sister(called violet)goes and works in as made. one day,when they're walking in a street,simon founds a golden card.it wrote:"do you wanna be rich?come to [the shops name] and you will see what will happen next!"they go there and they see a man with light blue hair and white skin.he told them to go to the closet and after few minutes they'll go to another world and they'll be very rich there.they belive him and go there.but when they go in the closet,they go to another world but for being rich they have to do some chalenges and in any chalenge they'll go in a world.they have to find a golden key and a golden doorto get in to the next world.in these chalenges,the mmembers should die..the last one who could stay alive until the end,will win the price!
what do you think of it?and please tell me the things that you liked and you didn't liked! -
*members not mmembers
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COOOL!!:D
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