Of I made this into a book,
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Vampire in Exeter
by Cyndonia Clementine
There's a brave new girl in Exeter and she has everybody talking. Stunningly beautiful and devastatingly strong, all the boys want her. However, Marina Millinson has a secret - she's a spiteful vampire.
Tristan Hall is a kind, slim boy who enjoys boxing. He becomes fascinated by Marina who can stop meteors with her bare hands. He doesn't understand why she's so standoffish.
His bestfriend, an intuitive fairy called Ocean, helps Tristan begin to piece together the puzzle. Together, they discover the ultimate weapon - the purple, ripped blade.
When bodies start turning up all over Exeter, Tristan begins to fear the worst. The fairy urges her to report Marina to the police and he knows he should, so what's stopping him?
He may resist Marina's bite, but can he resist her charms?
Will he be caught running with the vampire? -
Wow I love it
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Thank you. So, do to think I should make it into a book?
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This is perfection and so are you (: and yes you should
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Thank you, Gabe. :)
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You welcome :))
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I'm havin trouble trying to find out if I should do this first person, third person, and if first person, to do it from Marina's point of view, or Tristan's...
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I would say marina point of view
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AZY JuniorI Agree with gabe
It looks interesting :D -
So, you guys don't think I should do third person?
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Depend of what kind of third persong you have on mind but for what I've read this is great as is it
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Third person: seer of all, knower of everything. It can center on one character withot going into first person.
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AZY JuniorI like 1st person better!
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Good point and a great one too. But the question will be how comfortable are you with a third person
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Okay. :)
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