This is another story
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Is is copied from Word so the " might not come up. And it's like Transformers but before they went on earth. I've been woking on this for ages.
In the silver, metal city of Karnopa, on the Planet of Casuval, Lunadust and her friends Optic Flash, Ricochet, Acecharger and Wingburner train for the upcoming battle for survival against the Dreadicons. "Stop being a wuss and attack me!" demands Lunadust to Acechager.
"No, youre my friend and I will not attack you" says Acecharger.
From the observation room, Optic Flash and Ricochet watch on, "He wont attack her" says Optic Flash.
"Yes" says Ricochet "Hell have to get very annoyed, to attack her"
Back in the training room Lunadust is provoking Acecharger. "I could beat you with my hand behind my back" she says poking him.
"Stop it!" says Acecharger, annoyed. Lunadust kicks Acecharger on the butt; he gets out his guns and runs at Lunadust. Lunadust spins and throws Acecharger on the floor. Acecharger looks up "How? Youre a girl!" he says shocked.
"Ever heard of practice, Ace?" smiles Lunadust. Lunadust helps Acecharger onto his feet and Ricochets voice comes over the P.A. "Could Luna report to the command room and Ace report to the observation room, for your scores"
"Well see ya, Luna" says Acecharger.
"Bye" Smiles Lunadust. She leaves the room and walks to the command room.
Lunadust walks into Wingburner. "Hey Wing" she smiles.
"Hi Luna, where you going?" asks Wingburner.
"To see Optic" replies Lunadust.
"Good luck. I heard he was in a bad mood" says Wingburner.
"Oh, then Id better be quick" Lunadust smiles "Bye"
"Bye!" says Wingburner.
Lunadust walks along a long hallway. At the end of the hallway there is a huge, metal door. She steps outside the door. She knocks. "Enter" says a voice. She pushes the doors open. The room is light by candles around the room. Optic Flash is standing at the top of the room. "You wanted to see me" says Lunadust. "Ah, yes, Luna I have a very important mission for you" says Optic Flash.
"What is it?" asks Lunadust.
"It is to infiltrate the Dreadicon HeadQuarters and spy on their plans for the upcoming battle" says Optic Flash "Are you in?"
"You know me; never turn down a good spying mission!" laughs Lunadust.
Optic Flash chuckles "So true! You must travel to Laon and spy on Magnoray"
"Ok, I will" says Lunadust "I shall leave now"
"Very well. Good luck"
Lunadust get checked over by Ricochet. He gives her the all clear. She loads her weapons. Lunadust them says goodbye to everyone and leaves for Laon.
Lunadust gets to Laon; she turns invisible and walks into the Capital. She walks to the command centre and enters it. She finds where Magnoray is and she sits on a metal beam where she can see everything that happens. A Dreadicon called Techfire; Magnos second in command walks into the room where Lunadust is. He looks around so she keeps quiet. Spyscope, Techfires minicon isnt where he should be. She spots him just ahead of her. She keeps even quieter. Spyscope looks in Lunadusts direction. Spyscope screeches and Lunadusts cloaking turns off. Spyscope shots Lunadust and knocks her out, she falls.
She wakes up in a dark and damp room. She hears laughing, she turns to see Magnoray standing in front of her. Lunadust is lying on a table; there is a laser generator above her. "Well, well, well. Why isnt it Lunadust!" says Magnoray. Lunadust struggles to get out of her bonds. "You cant get out" He chuckles.
3 Days Later: "TELL ME WHERE THE ARCHIVES ARE!" shouts Magnoray.
"NEVER!" Shouts Lunadust.
"Its been three days and no one has come to recue you!" he laughs.
"Im sure theyll appear!" she shouts. The laser beings to warm up. Suddenly the door explodes in and the Swiftbots charge in firing at everyone. Optic Flash unlocks Lunadusts chains and helps her up.
"This place is rigged to blow, lets go!" he shouts. She nods and runs with Optic Flash. A flash of light and the building falls around them.
Lunadust coughs and moves the rubble off her body and sits up. "O-optic" she coughs. Lunadust slowly stands up, she wobbles but balances. "OPTIC!" Lunadust shouts. Looking around she sees movement from a few feet away. She slowly walks to the large rubble pile "Optic?" she says bending down.
"Lu-luna?" says Optic Flash slowly. She removes the rubble from Optic body and stares at him.
She gasps "Optic, youre... your legs. Theyve gone" Optic Flash looks up.
"WHAT?!" he shouts.
Lunadust looks around "Over there" says Luna. Luna speeds over to Optic Flashs legs, picks them up and hurries back over to Optic Flash. "Here, um... climb on my back" say Lunadust bending over. Optic Flash climbs up Lunadusts back and puts his arm around her neck to hold himself in place. Lunadust then slings Optic Flashs legs on Optic Flashs back. "Ok Optic, do you have any idea where to go?" asks Luna.
"Yes, there is a cave 10 klicks North, well be safe" says Optic Flash.
"Ok, then. North it is!" smiles Luna "Oh and Optic let me know if you feel faint or dizzy".
Optic smiles "Ok"
They walk for 2 and a half hours, they get to the cave and Lunadust puts Optic Flash down on the floor, carefully. "How do you feel?" asks Lunadust.
"I feel a bit faint but Ill be ok" says Optic Flash.
"Ok, Ill try to put your legs back on" says Lunadust "Ricochet is my mentor when it comes to Medical stuff"
"Oh yeah" says Optic Flash "Just dont put the back to front" They both chuckle. Luna turns her hand into a welder and welds his legs back on.
"Youll need to rest" says Luna dust "You lost a lot of Actigon"
"Ok" says Optic Flash.
Outside Lunadust and Optic Flash can hear shouting. "OPTIC, LUNA. OUT YOU COME!" shouts Magnoray.
"Im going to kill him!" says Optic Flash, annoyed.
"Optic, no. Ill go" says Luna.
"NO! He is after me" says Optic Flash "Im going weather you like it or not!" Optic Flash stands up but Lunadust sits him back on the floor.
"Optic, please you are too weak. Im a good warrior" says Luna "Let me go and face him!"
Optic stands up "Luna, just promise me one thing" says Optic Flash. "Sure, what?" asks Luna.
Optic Flash smiles "This" Optic leans in and kisses Luna on the cheek. She blushes.
"I love you Optic" says Luna.
"Go get them girl" smiles Optic Flash. Luna rushes out of the cave. She stands proudly in front of Magnoray.
"Just Luna, no Optic!" chuckles Magnoray "Ill finish you off then Ill go for Optic"
"Over my dead body!" shouts Luna.
"That can be arranged" laughs Magnoray. Lunadusts arms and hands turn to blades.
Magnoray runs at Lunadust. Lunadust jumps above him, attacking his back. Magnoray turns around and shoots at Lunadust forcing her back. Other Dreadicons attack Luna from all angles. Techfire sneaks behind Lunadust and into the cave where Optic Flash is. Lunadust hears a loud bang and dodges the other Dreadicons and runs into the cave after Techfire. She dives on Techos back and is about to stab him when she notices that Spyscope, isnt where he should be. Spyscope flies from behind Optic Flash, who is on the floor, bleeding and shoots at Lunadust. She jumps off Techfire and shoots back at Spyscope. Spyscope lands a deadly shot to Lunadusts chest. She falls on the floor, grasping her chest. Optic Flash slowly stands up, turns his hands into guns and shoots at Techfire and Spyscope. They shoot Optic in the head and chest and flee the cave.
Lunadust slowly stands up and crawls to Optic. "Dont die!" she says. Ricochet runs in and sees them. "Help Optic!" says Luna to Ricochet. He nods and takes Optic outside to the medivan. She falls on the floor, almost dead. Wingburner runs in and pick the unconscious robot. He speeds out and puts her next to Optic Flash. Optic Flash holds Lunadusts hand and falls unconscious.
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What the hell the gaps between paragraphs didn't come up. Grr!
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they do that i know they get very fustrating...
maybe you should name it TransBots (transformers+robots) -
Cool I like it!
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That was huge!
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Thanks!
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loving it, u such a good writer, the first part reminded me of my story, The Last Healer
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Thanks and cool!
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