This is a part in a song i wrote

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Thread Topic: This is a part in a song i wrote

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  BMTH Newbie

  14 years ago
  Here it goes
  
  Corus:
  
  Before i run...FAR away
  I need to take a holiday
  Maybe its a fall from grace
  I gotta find a new place
  
  A holiday
  I'll set up on a new chase
  I gotta see a new face
  I need to take a holiday
  
  Now tell me what you thought so far.I Know its short but its all i got.
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  Carri04 Novice

  14 years ago
  Pretty good, but the concept is worn out which kind of ruins it.
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  BMTH Newbie

  14 years ago
  yea,i know,i was bored and put some stuff together haha
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  Alana Novice

  14 years ago
  its pretty good kyle. i can see where you're coming from.
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  Hatshepsut237 Newbie

  14 years ago
  That's cool

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