My poems
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Morning is like night to
Battle with growing
Fright
Crimson birds caught in
Flight
Covering my bloodshot
Eyes
Hat is just a word
Love is just a knife
Fill it up and let it
Drop like the knife into
My heart
Hope you miss me
But it is not our
Good-bye
I will not
Confine myself
To the space of your
Reality
I will not live
In a world
Of clones
I will live
In my mind
Where I am
Free
Asphyxiation
Air deprivation
Diving into lunacy
Deep as the ocean's edge
Will I ever reach the end?
I fear not
As there is no end to the madness
My friend
There is no such thing
As Reality
Only a widely accepted version
Of some one else's
Nightmare
Somebody once told me
Pain was just a game
We all had to play
But why am I
In overtime and Sudden Death
Every other day?
Im releasing my hold
On reality
And drowning in the madness
Im already submerged in
Im falling
Deeper and deeper
Into this hole Ive dug for myself
Where the ravens and crows
Are the only ones watching
Just waiting for me to die
How am I supposed to trust some one else
To hold the pieces together
When I cant?
To the world, I grin
When they watch
Inside I have to pull myself together
And scream
Smile
Empty
Soul
You took my yesterday
Made fun of all my pain
Now the rain cant wash the tears away
Theres a hole left here ruled by my stupid fears
Theres no way in hell Ill be okay
Black as day
Dark as night
The ravens wings hold me tight
Deep as the ocean
Clear as the stars
This good-bye 'tis not ours
Frozen in terror
Eyes widen in fright
I wait to claim my crimson bloodright
Im so broken
You could sew me back together
And I would still fall apart
Forgotten in the days
The fog of time provides the haze
My worlds turned upside down
I want to touch the sky
But Im afraid Ill drown
Can anyone hear me?
My screams erupt from the walls
Can anyone feel me?
Echoing down the halls
Can anyone love me?
Am I capable of love at all?
Its not my life Im living
Though the hell is clearly true
Maybe its your life Im stealing
Taking over you
I guess cruelty
Runs in your veins
The need to torture
Condem those to weak
To defend themselves
Flows in a crimson racetrack
Lost in endless eternity
Swallowed in times folds
The inky darkness waits
Creating humanity's molds -
I meant "Hate" up on the first one
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No one in five hours
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Seriously?
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Madi - your brief and vague descriptions are very good indeed! They leave one to create their own personal, endless image immersed in haunting suspense and mystery.
Your honesty is in tremendous doses; very refreshing I think, and only leaves one to grown even more appreciation and an emotional connection the poem, as it may be a relatable.
Your questions make us as all delve to try and uncover an answer. Your sudden bursts of fluent rhythm only lets this story flow effortlessly. This story - your poetic story - seeps into heavy emotions that let underlying emotions and questions rise to the surface; it's wonderfully simplistic, refreshingly honest and simply beautiful.
Well done! -
Thanks Leah. Its really a lot of tiny poems. Every time there's a space is a new poem.
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Well done..
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A few lacked originality though
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I appreciate the critisicm. Im not being sarcastic.
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Damn it
You said you loved me
But why does it feel like I can't breathe?
Why are your hands on my neck
Making me choke you my words?
Why is there a knife in my back
And another at my throat?
You said you loved me
But I can't figure you why
You've done this to me
Made me die -
No new peopple?
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Give me one reason
Why I should stay
When all you've ever done is ignore me
Please, help me see
How you've loved me all this time
Now you're jusr wasting mine
Please stop your little act
I'm giving you one fact
You may have loved me before
But I don't love you anymore -
Give me one reason
Why I should stay
When all you've ever done is ignore me
Please, help me see
How you've loved me all this time
Now you're jusr wasting mine
Please stop your little act
I'm giving you one fact
You may have loved me before
But I don't love you anymore -
I don't want to melt into the shadows
But I'm afraid to step into the light
I want to soar above my worries
But I don't have the wings to take flight
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