I'm having so much trouble coming up with a song concept
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Thread Topic: I'm having so much trouble coming up with a song concept
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I don't like writing about the usual so I'm writing a song called 'Magnet Despair' another ver of Magnet (like the original and Magnet Freedom)
Magnet songs are usually about forbidden love and how society looks down upon them
mine is twice as depressing since one of the lovers is dead xD I'm having trouble coming up with the complete concept though.
-forbidden love
-society frowns down upon them
-dead lover
idk what else to add to it (think story concept xD) -
So it's like a Romeo and Juliet story type thing :D
Hm.........well the basic concept you have so far is pretty broad, so you could do almost anything with it. Try narrowing down on them and see what you come up with. -
Yes except it's not a story of lusty teenagers who killed themselves cause they're not allowed to f--- xD
It's supposed to be a song of mourning or something so I'm quite off, I love writing songs, it's just the concepts that always get to me (cause i DON'T like writing songs that have been done one too many times, I like stories ^^)
But I be hasing so much trouble with this D: -
So when do you plan on on of them dieing? Beginning, middle, or end?
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I'm thinking of a once upon a time thing
starts off with the girl talking about how happy they were together, no matter what society thought of them, it was just them against the world
then goes off to her speaking about how everything changed once her love disappeared (i'm writing it indirectly as if the lover either died, left, or just disappeared) and then she continues on singing about how she wished she was with them again
and ends with a wish of death 'I wish to rejoin you again'
but idk, still a lot of revision ._. -
That sounds beautiful, Tingy! :D I love these types of songs. The ones that make you cry and leave you hazed over with a certain numbness after they're finished...
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That sounds really good so far! You got any ideas on what you want for sure to be in the song?
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I know I want it to be mournful and tear-jerking xD aside from that, all three of the things I listed from before is what I REALLY want to be in the song (aside from the dead lover thing, it has to have something to do with Despair since it's part of the title)
@Alana thank you :'D
Agreed, I really like these songs so I'm contributing to the music community with this stuff.
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